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Black Phoebe Among the Pigeons
Free verse poem about female black phoebe



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Rating of the story Finding his Princess (part two) by patcelaw

Thank you for ending the story with the Cinderella ending. Hopefully, Gwendolyn really loves the prince and that prince would love her for more than her looks. I'm glad that the king approved and that Gwendolyn's father approved, too!


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2025

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Rating of the book chapter A Dinner for Sandra by jmdg1954
Chapter 8 of the book For Sandra Stoner- Mitchell

Oh!!! I ran out of six stars. This is such a sweet story with such wonderful intent. Will either you or Graham be able to get off your stools to make the meal, or maybe it can be breakfast.


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2025

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Rating of the poem What Makes You a Bird? by lyenochka
Chapter 1 of the book Wonder of Birds - Napowrimo

Now I know it will take longer for you to write a poem because you do research. I have learned so much from your poem and the lovely art piece. I've also learnt that birdies and human have two things in common. We all have backbones and we are warm-blooded.

Excellent.


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2025

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Rating of the poem As Petals Fall by nancyjam

An excellent entry for the Sonnet Poetry contest. One day I hope to write a Sonnet so lovely. So smooth flowing in meter and a lovely message throughout with a perfect closing. Good luck in the contest. It should be a snap


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2025

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Rating of the poem Pay the Ferryman by Marilyn Hamilton
Chapter 2 of the book Curses, Hearses and Deadly Verses

Great job with your sonnet! I'm glad that you're doing these traditional forms, too. Yes, I have read about the Greek mythological ferryman and the toll that he requires to cross the River Styx. You described it well here.


 Comment Written 01-Apr-2025

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Black Phoebe Among the Pigeons
Free verse poem about female black phoebe