Finding his Princess (part two)
A story for the challenge.15 total reviews
Comment from Julie G1
Well written. The fairy tale continues, so this fictional enchantment is rounded off, engaging the reader skilfully in the happy ending of a true romance. The characters are fully entrancing, as the magic of love is in the air.
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Well written. The fairy tale continues, so this fictional enchantment is rounded off, engaging the reader skilfully in the happy ending of a true romance. The characters are fully entrancing, as the magic of love is in the air.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for your very kind review. Appreciate it
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love happy endings Patricia and you did not disappoint here in your warm romantic story of Cinderella. Your version does not include the ugly sisters! Ha ha a, I enjoyed your delightful uplifting post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I love happy endings Patricia and you did not disappoint here in your warm romantic story of Cinderella. Your version does not include the ugly sisters! Ha ha a, I enjoyed your delightful uplifting post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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This is a very nice review thank you so much
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for ending the story with the Cinderella ending. Hopefully, Gwendolyn really loves the prince and that prince would love her for more than her looks. I'm glad that the king approved and that Gwendolyn's father approved, too!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for ending the story with the Cinderella ending. Hopefully, Gwendolyn really loves the prince and that prince would love her for more than her looks. I'm glad that the king approved and that Gwendolyn's father approved, too!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you for making time to read and review my work. I appreciate it.
Comment from Mistydawn
I loved your ending. I think it's perfect an adult fairy tail. I'm sorry to hear about your eyesight though. Thank you for kind recognition, but your the one that brought the idea to life. Thank you so much for the pumps.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I loved your ending. I think it's perfect an adult fairy tail. I'm sorry to hear about your eyesight though. Thank you for kind recognition, but your the one that brought the idea to life. Thank you so much for the pumps.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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You're so welcome. I had a really hard time finishing it out just because it is so difficult for me to go back and edit things when it's a long story that's why I do a lot of short writing because I have a hard time going back in editing when it needs to be done. So from now on, you'll probably see me do poetry and short stuff.
Comment from evilynne
It's a cute story and the ending is appropriately happy. Fairytales should all have a happy endings. And maybe more happy endings will happen to this prince and his love. Evi
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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It's a cute story and the ending is appropriately happy. Fairytales should all have a happy endings. And maybe more happy endings will happen to this prince and his love. Evi
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I am always grateful when I get nice review
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I am always grateful when I get nice review
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I really liked the story. It's creative and fun to read.
With a smile on his face, the sunset dad "thank you so much. I appreciate that you feel that Gwendolyn could be a real asset to our royal family and I will go do that very thing right now. (TRY: With a smile on his face, the son said, "Dad, thank you so much. I appreciate that you feel that Gwendolyn could be a real asset to our royal family, and I will go do that very thing right now.')
father's hand and ask this very important question, sir. "I would like to ask you if I could have your daughter's hand in marriage?" (question, "Sir, I)
so, the Prince did that very thing he went to Glenland deal down on one knee and ask her if she would marry him. (The prince did that..)
with a tremblingvoice said, "yes, I will marry you." (trembling voice said, "Yes, )
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I really liked the story. It's creative and fun to read.
With a smile on his face, the sunset dad "thank you so much. I appreciate that you feel that Gwendolyn could be a real asset to our royal family and I will go do that very thing right now. (TRY: With a smile on his face, the son said, "Dad, thank you so much. I appreciate that you feel that Gwendolyn could be a real asset to our royal family, and I will go do that very thing right now.')
father's hand and ask this very important question, sir. "I would like to ask you if I could have your daughter's hand in marriage?" (question, "Sir, I)
so, the Prince did that very thing he went to Glenland deal down on one knee and ask her if she would marry him. (The prince did that..)
with a tremblingvoice said, "yes, I will marry you." (trembling voice said, "Yes, )
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your review and the pointing out of the corrections that I need to make but because of my vision, I'll just have to leave it as it is.
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Thank you for your review and the pointing out of the corrections that I need to make but because of my vision, I'll just have to leave it as it is.
Comment from jim vecchio
One minor hitch: At one point you wrote "Glendalin is a beautiful young lady" meaning Gwendolyn. Otherwise, this is a positive, fanciful "fairy tale" that was enhanced by your AI artistry.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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One minor hitch: At one point you wrote "Glendalin is a beautiful young lady" meaning Gwendolyn. Otherwise, this is a positive, fanciful "fairy tale" that was enhanced by your AI artistry.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for stopping by reading my working and leaving a nice review I corrected the
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Thank you for stopping by reading my working and leaving a nice review I corrected the
Comment from royowen
What a marvellous thing for a young woman to be asked to marry a prince, a fairy tale come true, and he did the right thing and asked her dad first, beautifully written Pat, blessings Roy
Typo. He went to (Glenland) down in one knee.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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What a marvellous thing for a young woman to be asked to marry a prince, a fairy tale come true, and he did the right thing and asked her dad first, beautifully written Pat, blessings Roy
Typo. He went to (Glenland) down in one knee.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it. I made the correction.
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Most welcome
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Thank you so much for your review. I appreciate it. I made the correction.
Comment from Carol Clark2
Good ending to the story, Patricia. When your eyes are not bothering you so much, you will want to edit this a bit, especially the final paragraph. If you need suggestions/help, please PM me. Sorry your vision is giving you difficulty. Have a blessed day. Carol
A few fixes: With a smile on his face, (the son said, "Dad, thank you so much....that very thing right now.(")
"...I think young (Gwendolyn) is a beautiful young lady...."
(So) the Prince did that very thing(. He) went to (Gwendolyn, knelt down on one knee and (asked) her....
...(with a trembling voice) said, ("Yes,) I will marry you."
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Good ending to the story, Patricia. When your eyes are not bothering you so much, you will want to edit this a bit, especially the final paragraph. If you need suggestions/help, please PM me. Sorry your vision is giving you difficulty. Have a blessed day. Carol
A few fixes: With a smile on his face, (the son said, "Dad, thank you so much....that very thing right now.(")
"...I think young (Gwendolyn) is a beautiful young lady...."
(So) the Prince did that very thing(. He) went to (Gwendolyn, knelt down on one knee and (asked) her....
...(with a trembling voice) said, ("Yes,) I will marry you."
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your review. I appreciate it very much. I went back and made a slight change. I don't know whether that was what you were talking about or not but you might check it again.
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I'll try to take a look at it later tonight. My eyes are telling me it's time to shut down the computer for a while. I know you understand that. Blessings.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
A real an innocent story with Cinderella's origins that reached the happy ending faster than the classic story. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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A real an innocent story with Cinderella's origins that reached the happy ending faster than the classic story. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much for stopping in bad reading my work and a nice review.
