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Tom Horonzy

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Rating of the poem Leatherface by Marilyn Hamilton
Chapter 91 of the book NightScares

Did you work for a living or simply played music all your life. I mean I collect records and recently sold 1500 forty-fives from the 50-60-and seventies. I added a couple hundred to my play list but it seems your is endless


 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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Rating of the poem Leatherface by Marilyn Hamilton
Chapter 91 of the book NightScares

You chose the best one! I'm the guy who knows nothing about horror movies but loves to watch them. I couldn't guess what is going to happen next with a script of the scenes right in front of me. I'm going to give this prompt a try. Nice work.


 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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Tom Horonzy

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Rating of the poem Adversity Creates Strength by Douglas Goff

Well, who is to argue with nature. I always thought the mighty oak set roots deep but Ms Helene came through the Carolina's and blew them over like they were duck pins with a sixteen pound bowling ball. Maybe, she only took out the weaker ones.


 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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Rating of the poem The Mummy's Curse by Marilyn Hamilton
Chapter 4 of the book Curses, Hearses and Deadly Verses

To me, this Triolet Poem is excellent, and the perfect form to describe a Mummy's Curse. The repetition of key lines adds a dramatic and chilling touch to the combination of horrifying picture and terrifying words.


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Rating of the poem Finding Nemo

Oh I can't stopping chuckling at your meme...

You CAN'T HANDLE the tooth!

This is great, loved it.
Good luck to you in the contest...
John

Need more syllables


 Comment Written 04-Apr-2025

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