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Rating of the story What Would You Do? by Debi Pick Marquette

This is a terrible thing to have happened, especially if that was the burial plot you thought was yours had been taken by your aunt. If you have the deed, then the space should have been yours. I hate to think it may lead to family friction before this can be worked out. You may have to have legal advice to get it settled. My grandparents and other relatives are buried in a very old cemetery, and it's not maintained very well. You have other things to worry about now, considering your health. Let a legal expert do the fretting for you. judi


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Rating of the story Greed and Avarice and much worse by Dawn Munro

I wish I had a 6 for you. Heck, I wish I had a dozen 6's for you! Trump calls every negative thing about him a lie because he doesn't like it being called out and unfortunately there are those who amazingly believe everything he says. They would have us ignore that fact that we have seen it with our own eyes and heard it with our own ears! He is tanking the economy on purpose and somehow it doesn't matter. thanks for sharing.


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Rating of the story What Would You Do? by Debi Pick Marquette

My dearest Debi,
I believe you have every right to be infuriated. They should be made to move her grave somewhere else. What I'm guessing happened is that they found there was a plot paid for already beside your mother and took it. If, however, they put up money for a plot, it should be used to move your aunt. This is a complete travesty!! You have every right to feel the way you do.

Love you bunches. Let us know how it turns out.
Rhonda


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Rating of the book chapter Joel's farm by Tim Margetts
Chapter 94 of the book Awakening - V2

I was wondering where Misty and Elara were when Del was fighting those other scoundrels. Now I know. They were busy too. You did a wonderful job. Now to rescue Naomi. Still no rest for our friends.


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Rating of the poem The Shadow in My Room by Marilyn Hamilton
Chapter 11 of the book Curses, Hearses and Deadly Verses

Oy!! Sleep with the lights on, Woman!!

Did you ever read the Calvin and Hobbes comic strip? Calvin had a "closet full of anxieties" directly across from his bed, and many night, he was visited by characters from it. My favorite was his Kindergarten librarian who informed him he'd neglected to return a book and now owed tens of thousands of dollars on it. His night terrors seems way more benign than yours.


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