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Naani for the Japanese Poetry Club Event

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Her Sunday Best

by Gypsy Blue Rose


If You Would Like To Join the Japanese Poetry Club, please check my author notes
 
 
 
 
dressed in her Sunday best,
child watches a lucky kid
   leave with new parents —
raindrops on the window pain
 
 
 
 
 
 
 



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A "windowpane" is a piece of glass in a window. "Window pain" is spelled wrong on purpose

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NAANI POEM is an Indian poetic form. It's very similar to Japanese poetic forms, in that it has a set line and syllable count. It has 4-lines and a total 20-25 syllables. It's usually about nature or human relations but not strictly. The lines are grammatically connected and never rhyme. ===
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.


Gypsy

Club entry for the "NAANI POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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