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Naani for the Japanese Poetry Club Event

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Lonesome Bard

by Gypsy Blue Rose


Dedicated to Federico Garcia Lorca, prominent 20th-century Spanish poet
 
 
lonesome bard
poured his bleeding heart
over tattered pages
saturated
with passion, love, and country


 
 
 
 
 




Bard = poet in Old English

3/5/6/4/7 = 25 syllables

NAANI POEM is an Indian poetic form. It's very similar to Japanese Poetry in that it's succinct, syllable count based, and imagistic. It's usually about nature or human relations but not strictly. The lines are grammatically connected and never rhyme. ===
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

Club entry for the "NAANI POEM" event in "JAPANESE POETRY CLUB".  Locate a writing club.
Pays one point and 2 member cents.


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