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4/6/5 Humanity Winter Haiku
A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes
~ Window Ajar ~
by Gypsy Blue Rose
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window ajar
lets cold air in the room —
winter in her bones  |
Humanity Haiku is a haiku about a season and how humans relate to it.
HAIKU is a short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to convey the essence of an experience of nature and season intuitively linked to the human condition. It juxtaposes two images in a way that prompts the reader to make an insightful connection between them. It alludes to a season of the year. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) but in English is 17 syllables OR LESS. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. Use a dash before the satori ( the last line). Avoid alliteration, metaphor, personification, and capital letters (proper names are okay). === click here to read Haiku Society of America, HAIKU EXAMPLES === click here to read Haiku Society of America HAIKU RULES
=== click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule
pictures from google; the bottom picture is an iris flower, it withstands winter weather but stays dormant; I added the iris for artistic purposes.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
HAIKU is a short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to convey the essence of an experience of nature and season intuitively linked to the human condition. It juxtaposes two images in a way that prompts the reader to make an insightful connection between them. It alludes to a season of the year. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) but in English is 17 syllables OR LESS. Capitalization and punctuation should only be used when necessary. Use a dash before the satori ( the last line). Avoid alliteration, metaphor, personification, and capital letters (proper names are okay). === click here to read Haiku Society of America, HAIKU EXAMPLES === click here to read Haiku Society of America HAIKU RULES
=== click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule
pictures from google; the bottom picture is an iris flower, it withstands winter weather but stays dormant; I added the iris for artistic purposes.
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Club entry for the "HUMANITY WINTER HAIKU" event in "HAIKU CLUB". Locate a writing club.
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