One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a seriously sad poem. If I've interpreted it correctly, the children are in an orphanage or something of that nature and waiting to be adopted. The one looking out the window was not chosen.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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This is a seriously sad poem. If I've interpreted it correctly, the children are in an orphanage or something of that nature and waiting to be adopted. The one looking out the window was not chosen.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2023
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Yes, you got it right. It's from an orphan looking through a window at another lucky orphan being adopted...she got dressed up for nothing. I was thinking how sad that would feel.
Thank you. I appreciate your excellent review and kind feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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You are welcome.
Comment from Ricky1024
I misspel words to give them different meanings or for people to try to understand what I'm seeing.
"I" for Eye.
Mean seeing not as a noun in the first person.
But as a verb in sight or seeing.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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I misspel words to give them different meanings or for people to try to understand what I'm seeing.
"I" for Eye.
Mean seeing not as a noun in the first person.
But as a verb in sight or seeing.
Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 02-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
This is rather brilliant dear friend Gypsy, possibly one of the best short form poems I have ever seen. It really give substance to the terrible societal flaws that lie on our human endeavours, no child deserves the ignominy of orphanhood. Well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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This is rather brilliant dear friend Gypsy, possibly one of the best short form poems I have ever seen. It really give substance to the terrible societal flaws that lie on our human endeavours, no child deserves the ignominy of orphanhood. Well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Roy,
Thank you very much! I appreciate your thoughtful and exceptional six stars review. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
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You too
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....and ine that shines a light on a critical option for couples who cannot conceive. My wife and I had that problem and had tried fertility treatments, and adaption was the next option but my marriage ended before that stage, unfortunately
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....and ine that shines a light on a critical option for couples who cannot conceive. My wife and I had that problem and had tried fertility treatments, and adaption was the next option but my marriage ended before that stage, unfortunately
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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I'm sorry. Mike. Divorce is very hard, unless the spouse sucks lol
Thank you very much! I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
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It was rough to go through but I'm sorta glad we didn't have children when we got divorced
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. Thank you for the
author's notes - great information! The author's words made me think
of how adoption can make a difference in a child's life. The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork goes well with the words of this poem.
Hi Gypsy, hope you are doing well....Maria
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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The author's words are clear, descriptive and creative. Thank you for the
author's notes - great information! The author's words made me think
of how adoption can make a difference in a child's life. The poem flows
and connects well. The artwork goes well with the words of this poem.
Hi Gypsy, hope you are doing well....Maria
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Hello, Maria. I'm good, how are you?
Thank you very much! I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
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Hi Gypsy, I am good too. Went to Baton
Rouge for the Holidays. My older son
lives there with his family. Living one
day at time! Have a great night, Maria
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Like your poem. Your poetry is always so well written and have such beautiful images. How many children must long for adoption day to arrive when they are placed for adoption.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Like your poem. Your poetry is always so well written and have such beautiful images. How many children must long for adoption day to arrive when they are placed for adoption.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A very sad and emotional read. In your words, you give your reader the sense of loneliness and disappointment.
Well done. I enjoyed reading
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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A very sad and emotional read. In your words, you give your reader the sense of loneliness and disappointment.
Well done. I enjoyed reading
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Comment from patcelaw
Gypsy Rose, I enjoyed this poem, because of the fact that it is written for national adoption day. When I was 19 I myself gave up a son for adoption. He had been the result of a rape, and I refused an abortion which my family wanted me to do. I am so glad that I gave him up for adoption, and when he was 35 years of age, I got to meet him. He and I are friends today and I talk to him Several times a year. Patricia.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Gypsy Rose, I enjoyed this poem, because of the fact that it is written for national adoption day. When I was 19 I myself gave up a son for adoption. He had been the result of a rape, and I refused an abortion which my family wanted me to do. I am so glad that I gave him up for adoption, and when he was 35 years of age, I got to meet him. He and I are friends today and I talk to him Several times a year. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this poem with us. My heart went out to the child who wasn't chosen. I can't imagine how painful that would be. Thank you for pointing this out. We all need to hear it.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you for sharing this poem with us. My heart went out to the child who wasn't chosen. I can't imagine how painful that would be. Thank you for pointing this out. We all need to hear it.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
Comment from zanya
Wow what powerful emotions are evokded here in these relatively few words - the raindrops adding to the sense of loss and loneliness- eternally waiting hoping to be next !
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Wow what powerful emotions are evokded here in these relatively few words - the raindrops adding to the sense of loss and loneliness- eternally waiting hoping to be next !
Comment Written 01-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much! I appreciate your thoughtful review and kind words. Have a wonderful day.
Gypsy
