Sonnets
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "A Tryst For Three"A collection of sonnets
18 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Oh Michael, that is one thing I love about your writes...they are you...and you write it you way...love the last two lines...I think I have been there before...mad...so very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
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Oh Michael, that is one thing I love about your writes...they are you...and you write it you way...love the last two lines...I think I have been there before...mad...so very well written...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
Comment from dmt1967
There are too many rules when it comes to poetry. You either feel it or you don't. I like the red writing on the black background and the horror picture of the girl. Thank you for sharing.
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There are too many rules when it comes to poetry. You either feel it or you don't. I like the red writing on the black background and the horror picture of the girl. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2015
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the style. Three is a crowd. You wrote of how one deals with it. I would not have the guts to do it myself, but I understand. Great work.
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I love the picture. I love the poem. I love the style. Three is a crowd. You wrote of how one deals with it. I would not have the guts to do it myself, but I understand. Great work.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
Comment from CR Delport
That is why I find it so hard to write to specific requests. The story that emerge often doesn't meet the guidelines. As always, this is well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
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That is why I find it so hard to write to specific requests. The story that emerge often doesn't meet the guidelines. As always, this is well done.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2015
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Glad you broker the rules my friend..Why just because you can... Can't say this was a delightful read hehehe But it said one powerful statement..Not all can or do forgive!!
TK
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Glad you broker the rules my friend..Why just because you can... Can't say this was a delightful read hehehe But it said one powerful statement..Not all can or do forgive!!
TK
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
Comment from artemis53
"I love the taste of vengeance even more" seals it for me since I believe that part of being human is to have flaws, some greater than others. I had no problem with reading the verse (that to myself is free verse). Putting restrictions on thought and the patterns in which we choose to express them is a power play to me and I don't care to play. Nice job!!!
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"I love the taste of vengeance even more" seals it for me since I believe that part of being human is to have flaws, some greater than others. I had no problem with reading the verse (that to myself is free verse). Putting restrictions on thought and the patterns in which we choose to express them is a power play to me and I don't care to play. Nice job!!!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
Comment from LIJ Red
Bravo for summing up the nitpicking restrictions. As the butler told the brit who potted his wife's lover with his fowling piece, "Magnificent, sir. You got him on the rise."
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Bravo for summing up the nitpicking restrictions. As the butler told the brit who potted his wife's lover with his fowling piece, "Magnificent, sir. You got him on the rise."
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
Comment from write hand blue
The layout is striking and up to date. The artwork is an obvious attraction to me. lol. Red lettering on black is just right for the subject.
This is a memorable and unique write. Your skill with words is obvious. Interesting, concise... inspiring even, where do I end. This is my idea of poetry.
May you keep breaking those rules.
:) Mel.
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The layout is striking and up to date. The artwork is an obvious attraction to me. lol. Red lettering on black is just right for the subject.
This is a memorable and unique write. Your skill with words is obvious. Interesting, concise... inspiring even, where do I end. This is my idea of poetry.
May you keep breaking those rules.
:) Mel.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
Comment from Sasha
This is marvelous free verse and since I am sill lost about what iambic pentameter is, I didn't even notice you didn't use it. Great work with this one. If I didn't know better I would have thought this was one of Dean's creations.
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This is marvelous free verse and since I am sill lost about what iambic pentameter is, I didn't even notice you didn't use it. Great work with this one. If I didn't know better I would have thought this was one of Dean's creations.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
Comment from sweetwoodjax
I enjoyed reading this blank verse sonnet, Michael, great imagery presented about the deadly menace that breaks up the tryst. vengeance tastes so sweet---and coppery too.
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I enjoyed reading this blank verse sonnet, Michael, great imagery presented about the deadly menace that breaks up the tryst. vengeance tastes so sweet---and coppery too.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2015
