One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Gypsy Queen,
A well written, yet disturbing Kojiki poem.
What makes or turns people into the dysfunctional animals they become? I don't want to even go there in my mind as I usually do when reading. This is a trigger for me... and I don't want to get mad...
"You wouldn't like me when I get mad!" The Hulk.
All the very best in this contest.
Hey((((( I've entered this contest... ah well, at least we have shortened our odds by having us both in it.
With our thoughts we create...
a white light of protection.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Hi Gypsy Queen,
A well written, yet disturbing Kojiki poem.
What makes or turns people into the dysfunctional animals they become? I don't want to even go there in my mind as I usually do when reading. This is a trigger for me... and I don't want to get mad...
"You wouldn't like me when I get mad!" The Hulk.
All the very best in this contest.
Hey((((( I've entered this contest... ah well, at least we have shortened our odds by having us both in it.
With our thoughts we create...
a white light of protection.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 06-May-2023
reply by the author on 07-May-2023
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Hahaha, my friend the Hulk. (*<>*)
Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and insightful detailed feedback. As always, your reviews mean a lot to me. I'll look for you in the voting booth. Cash prizes are fun. I won 4 so far. (*÷*)
This story is true and biographical. It makes me mad too. It was a hard chapter in my life.
Gypsy Queen hugs, Guapo
MariVal
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. In the neighborhood I taught first grade in, it wasn't uncommon for Mom's boyfriends to take advantages of the young girls. Sometimes Mom protected these horrible men. It was horrible, but a reality. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. In the neighborhood I taught first grade in, it wasn't uncommon for Mom's boyfriends to take advantages of the young girls. Sometimes Mom protected these horrible men. It was horrible, but a reality. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you for the good luck wish, you are very kind. I appreciate your review and positive feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. What a wonderful Kojiki but oh so true. What a shame that he did this to children even teens. What was shameful is that it happens more times that we are aware. How dare the CPS were lead to believe that they were right? Disgusting, pitiful and shameful! Blessed Be n Hugs!
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. What a wonderful
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. What a wonderful Kojiki but oh so true. What a shame that he did this to children even teens. What was shameful is that it happens more times that we are aware. How dare the CPS were lead to believe that they were right? Disgusting, pitiful and shameful! Blessed Be n Hugs!
Good luck wishes regarding the contest entry, Gypsy. What a wonderful
Comment Written 04-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Yes, she even told some people that made fun of her and said the ex-husband was just being a man.
Thank you for the exceptional six stars review, you are very kind. I appreciate your positive feedback. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from lyenochka
I'm so sorry for your friend. Her ex-husband really did need some help. It's a bizarre thing and I remember one guy buying women's used underwear. I didn't know why until I read your poem.
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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I'm so sorry for your friend. Her ex-husband really did need some help. It's a bizarre thing and I remember one guy buying women's used underwear. I didn't know why until I read your poem.
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you, big sister. I appreciate your kind words. What he did tore up the family.
Love,
Marival
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Gypsy, I'm so sorry for your friend and her daughters. I have never heard of such a story. The daughters should have seen that he needed help. Weren't they afraid? Just unbelievable.
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Gypsy, I'm so sorry for your friend and her daughters. I have never heard of such a story. The daughters should have seen that he needed help. Weren't they afraid? Just unbelievable.
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Her oldest daughter (ex was her step dad) was very hurt and didn't talk to him for years.
Thank you for the exceptional six stars review, you are very kind. I appreciate your positive feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
yea, that would've been the end of the marriage for me too!
hopefully the all got therapy after they left him
and this probably happens a lot more than anyone knows
this was a great double kojiki
thank you for sharing the story!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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yea, that would've been the end of the marriage for me too!
hopefully the all got therapy after they left him
and this probably happens a lot more than anyone knows
this was a great double kojiki
thank you for sharing the story!
shelley :)
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you very much for the positive review and feedback. Have a nice day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, it's sad but true, but your girlfriends story is heard all too often.
Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Of note:
Amidst those things were
her own daughter's undies too.
How could he do that?
(The above is disturbing and difficult for most, especially mother's, to understand.)
Well chosen photo--a mystery man indeed. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Hi Gypsy, it's sad but true, but your girlfriends story is heard all too often.
Your poem reads and flows well, and your message is clear. Of note:
Amidst those things were
her own daughter's undies too.
How could he do that?
(The above is disturbing and difficult for most, especially mother's, to understand.)
Well chosen photo--a mystery man indeed. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. Xo. M
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you very much for the positive review and feedback. Have a nice day.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Aaron Milavec
Hi, Gypsy!
You have an expressive tongue when it comes to narrating the story; but, this is overshadowed by visual graphics and choice of colors that is beyond my ability to praise.
Aaron
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Hi, Gypsy!
You have an expressive tongue when it comes to narrating the story; but, this is overshadowed by visual graphics and choice of colors that is beyond my ability to praise.
Aaron
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you, I'll take a look.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely post that you have presented very beautifully. I do appreciate reading your work. You always do such a beautiful job. Blessings. Patricia.
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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This is a lovely post that you have presented very beautifully. I do appreciate reading your work. You always do such a beautiful job. Blessings. Patricia.
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 04-May-2023
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Thank you very much for the positive review and feedback. Have a nice day.
Gypsy hugs