Winter Preparations
Magic is always there to share. Share yours with a child...38 total reviews
Comment from Ronni
Hi dear Yvette,
Truly love this sweet child's mythical, magical spin around heart's
delights and sights glorious beams and sparkle's! You have
kept this tale captivating from beginning to end, nudging us
back to our own favorite childhood fantasies and fascinations!!!
Very enticing and entertaining contest entry! Best of luck!
Thanks for sharing your ever spritely and enchanting spirit
and inspirations! No one does it better...congrats!
Love, blessings, Ronni :) ;),,,
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Hi dear Yvette,
Truly love this sweet child's mythical, magical spin around heart's
delights and sights glorious beams and sparkle's! You have
kept this tale captivating from beginning to end, nudging us
back to our own favorite childhood fantasies and fascinations!!!
Very enticing and entertaining contest entry! Best of luck!
Thanks for sharing your ever spritely and enchanting spirit
and inspirations! No one does it better...congrats!
Love, blessings, Ronni :) ;),,,
Comment Written 10-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Still smiling here, my lady! ;) So glad you enjoyed this little one, Ronni -- I had fun with it imagining some little faces 'listening' to the story being told! ;) Thanx for the congrats and keep a smile on that beautiful face! ;) Yvette
Comment from damommy
The spelling of gryphon threw me for a moment. I usually see it as griffin. I like your spelling. This is indeed a magic moment. I did not know the ears of corn could hear. Fascinating fact. This is a fun read with lots of whimsey and great imagination.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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The spelling of gryphon threw me for a moment. I usually see it as griffin. I like your spelling. This is indeed a magic moment. I did not know the ears of corn could hear. Fascinating fact. This is a fun read with lots of whimsey and great imagination.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Well, of course they can hear... they are 'ears' after all! ;) :) :) Oh, I had a fun time with this one, Yvonne -- love writing and then reading out loud and imagining little faces!! ;) Thanx for the review, my lady, and enjoy the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a super job with your contest entry, YM. I believe all children from 1-99 would love having this read aloud to them. Your presentation is beautiful--the image--perfect, the color scheme--striking, the rhymes and smooth flow--enjoyable, and the fun message of fantasy and use of imagination--stimulating. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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You did a super job with your contest entry, YM. I believe all children from 1-99 would love having this read aloud to them. Your presentation is beautiful--the image--perfect, the color scheme--striking, the rhymes and smooth flow--enjoyable, and the fun message of fantasy and use of imagination--stimulating. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Oh, I had a fun time with this one, Jan -- love writing and then reading out loud and imagining little faces!! ;) Thanx for the review, my lady, and enjoy the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Yvette, you have covered the season of autumn very well with both metaphor and personification - and some mythical content thrown in for good measure. Good rhyme and rhythm consistent throughout. I like the line 'A cornfield ready to eavesdrop.' - clever mix of fact and metaphor. I'll let you know if I find a gryphon LOL. Well done - regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Hello Yvette, you have covered the season of autumn very well with both metaphor and personification - and some mythical content thrown in for good measure. Good rhyme and rhythm consistent throughout. I like the line 'A cornfield ready to eavesdrop.' - clever mix of fact and metaphor. I'll let you know if I find a gryphon LOL. Well done - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Soooo.... did you find one?? I'm still looking... ;) :) Oh, I definitely had a fun time with this one, Dorothy -- love writing and then reading out loud and imagining little faces!! ;) Thanx for the review, my lady, and enjoy the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from kmoss
I thought that this poem would win the contest. I like the creative rhymes. The picture is magical and the poem conveys the magic. I look forward to reading more of your wonderful poems!
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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I thought that this poem would win the contest. I like the creative rhymes. The picture is magical and the poem conveys the magic. I look forward to reading more of your wonderful poems!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Oh, thanx so much for your confidence, my lady! ;) I had a fun time with this one as I love writing and then reading out loud and imagining little faces!! ;) Thanx for the review, K, and enjoy the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done poem for the child in all of us. Nicely brings together the joys of the fall season to life and the promise of winter to come to darken the land
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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nicely done poem for the child in all of us. Nicely brings together the joys of the fall season to life and the promise of winter to come to darken the land
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Oh, I had a fun time with this one, jake -- love writing and then reading out loud and imagining little faces!! ;) Thanx for the review, sir, and enjoy the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Charming whimsy--brilliant bit with ears of corn--kids will love this!
(breakout s/b break out; lay s/b lie unless you intend to speak in the expression common to your young audience--not sure if word and for/word count as rhyme.)
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Charming whimsy--brilliant bit with ears of corn--kids will love this!
(breakout s/b break out; lay s/b lie unless you intend to speak in the expression common to your young audience--not sure if word and for/word count as rhyme.)
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Oh, I had a fun time with this one, Liz -- love writing and then reading out loud and imagining little faces!! ;) Thanx for the review, my lady, and enjoy the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from amada
The children,and adults as well will be delighted with this rhyming poem about November and all the goodies it brings; food, friends and cheers. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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The children,and adults as well will be delighted with this rhyming poem about November and all the goodies it brings; food, friends and cheers. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Oh, I had a fun time with this one, amada -- love writing and then reading out loud and imagining little faces!! ;) Thanx for the review and enjoy the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Excellent write! Love your wording this is very well done. November's here so let's all cheer for harvest seasons finally here. Break out your boots and knitted hat, autumns layed put her welcome mat. Beautiful photo.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Excellent write! Love your wording this is very well done. November's here so let's all cheer for harvest seasons finally here. Break out your boots and knitted hat, autumns layed put her welcome mat. Beautiful photo.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Oh, I had a fun time with this one, Joanne -- love writing and then reading out loud and imagining little faces!! ;) Thanx for the review, my lady, and enjoy the week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Yvette.
You wrote this children's poem with a well matched rhyme scheme and flowing meter. I wish you good luck in the contest. I wonder what December will bring?
Z
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Hello Yvette.
You wrote this children's poem with a well matched rhyme scheme and flowing meter. I wish you good luck in the contest. I wonder what December will bring?
Z
Comment Written 07-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2020
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Oh, I had a fun time with this one, Z -- love writing and then reading out loud and imagining little faces!! ;) Thanx for the review, sir, and enjoy the week! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome
Z
