Romance Poetry posted March 23, 2025 Chapters:  ...9 10 -11- 12... 


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Gogyohka Poem Suite
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My Heart Feels the Rise

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
 
my heart feels the rise
of the flaming sun
with the torturing ache
of an impossible love
we could have had

.
.
every night I'm a prisoner
of your mysterious ways
the way the full moon
caresses your bare skin
and dew shines on your hair 
.
.
thousands of stars
shine in your eyes
and your lips await mine ajar
with a taste of sweet wine
I'm drunk with your taste
.
.
by dawn's light
seeds of sadness
grow in my heart
because it's time
to wake up
 
 
 




no more holding back
be reckless
share your love
with everyone - Rumi

Gogyohka is a five-line Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. You may use any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay. It usually doesn't rhyme, but natural not forced rhymes are okay. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe. source = writers digest
source=wikipedia

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Gypsy

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Inspired by Federico Garcia Lorca, 20th century Spanish Poet

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Gypsy

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