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Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "My Heart Feels the Rise".
6 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
There are many widows here who have that same dream of being with their beloved and missing them terribly. Morning makes those meetings disappear. Lovely pictures to illustrate your poem!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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There are many widows here who have that same dream of being with their beloved and missing them terribly. Morning makes those meetings disappear. Lovely pictures to illustrate your poem!
Comment Written 24-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much, big sister ❤️ 😘 🙏 💙
Marival
Comment from RJ Heritage
Dreams can be very empowering or disruptive, but dreams of love are often passionate and heartwarming that may disappear when awake. This is a well written poem that is well presented with vivid illustrations.
RJ
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Dreams can be very empowering or disruptive, but dreams of love are often passionate and heartwarming that may disappear when awake. This is a well written poem that is well presented with vivid illustrations.
RJ
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
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thank you very much 😊😊😊😊
gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is, indeed, a passionate and reckless outpouring of love, with a longing that it will go one forever, rather than wake up from the dream! Beautifully done! Take care Debbie
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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This is, indeed, a passionate and reckless outpouring of love, with a longing that it will go one forever, rather than wake up from the dream! Beautifully done! Take care Debbie
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much, Debbie,
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy------the cool thing about dreaming of sex is that I've had carnival relations with babes way out of my realistic norms. And when it's over, none of the usual complaints!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Another fine poem, Gypsy------the cool thing about dreaming of sex is that I've had carnival relations with babes way out of my realistic norms. And when it's over, none of the usual complaints!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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carnival relations? lol
thank you very much,
gypsy
Comment from Ulla
Aw, Marival this is just so beautiful. Your haunting words caught me completely off guard. It's wonderful and so true what you're saying. The presentation is as usual outstanding. Un abrazo y besitos, Ulla xx
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Aw, Marival this is just so beautiful. Your haunting words caught me completely off guard. It's wonderful and so true what you're saying. The presentation is as usual outstanding. Un abrazo y besitos, Ulla xx
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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thank you very much, guapa, i hope you are well. I appreciate your exceptional six-star review.
what are Spaniards saying about trump? lo estamos pasando fatal.
abracitos
marival
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They hate him. They don't talk much about him just as they didn't talk much about Franco. In other words, the fear and contempt is clear. I so feel for you all. I hope your country will stand up to him. Ya lo se que no es facil. Abrazos a ti tambien. Ulla xxx
Comment from shelley kaye
cool poem about sharing your love with that one special person
i like the dreamy, romantic feel of this... as the excitement grows...
smooth flow and line connection and great imagery
no spag or typos noticed
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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cool poem about sharing your love with that one special person
i like the dreamy, romantic feel of this... as the excitement grows...
smooth flow and line connection and great imagery
no spag or typos noticed
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 23-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy 😊
