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Gogyohka Poem (rules in author notes)
A chapter in the book 2025 Japanese Poetry

Eyes Lost in the Distance

by Gypsy Blue Rose


Presentation and Poem by Gypsy Blue Rose (c) copyright 1/11/25

 

your eyes lost in the distance 

like a dark wounded doe

in the amber light of dusk

its crimson drops and sobs

on the fresh fallen snow

 

 

 

 

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Gogyohka is a five-line Japanese poetic form with no strict rules on syllable count but as brief as possible. You may use any theme. Lines are grammatically connected. Alliteration, personification, and metaphor are okay. It usually doesn't rhyme, but natural not forced rhymes are okay. Japanese poets have written gogyohka since the 1910s. However, they did not name the form until 1983 by poet Enta Kusakabe.
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