2025 Japanese Poetry
Viewing comments for Prologue "Eyes Lost in the Distance".
3 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
aww poor deer. . .
and right in the middle of pooping too
(the pic looks like the deer it pooping LOL!!)
anyway, a great gogyohka with good imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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aww poor deer. . .
and right in the middle of pooping too
(the pic looks like the deer it pooping LOL!!)
anyway, a great gogyohka with good imagery and smooth flow
no spag or typos
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Marival
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is so beautiful. I love how you share such deep emotion. The comparison to a "dark wounded doe" is perfect. The way you describe the "amber light of dusk" is beautiful. I can really feel the quiet sadness in your words. Your poem touches something deep inside and leaves a lasting impression. Keep up the amazing work!
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Your poem is so beautiful. I love how you share such deep emotion. The comparison to a "dark wounded doe" is perfect. The way you describe the "amber light of dusk" is beautiful. I can really feel the quiet sadness in your words. Your poem touches something deep inside and leaves a lasting impression. Keep up the amazing work!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
I can feel the sadness of the one going through this loneliness as seen and mentioned by the doe's eyes. I have always associated sad eyes with a doe's eyes. So this is what I see here. Well presented.
RJ
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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I can feel the sadness of the one going through this loneliness as seen and mentioned by the doe's eyes. I have always associated sad eyes with a doe's eyes. So this is what I see here. Well presented.
RJ
Comment Written 11-Jan-2025
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2025
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words 😊
Gypsy
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My pleasure
RJ
