Romance Poetry posted September 20, 2024 | Chapters: | ...51 52 -53- 54... |
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The Death Carriage
by Gypsy Blue Rose
Gothic Love Tragedy Poem
The Death Carriage It was too far along for hope and the thought of life without you broke my heart and soul. I couldn't fathom to go on alone and I knew that if you went I would follow along The Death Carriage was outside our home and I begged the Grim Reaper to let us go. I said goodbye to our bed where we made love and slept for so many evenfalls. I said goodbye to our hearth that kept us warm Winter and Autumn. I said goodbye to the moon, the stars, and the sun. we had so many dusks and dawns. I said goodbye to our backyard with cherry blossoms in the trees and lotus in the pond. As we passed parks, we waved to old men resting on benches and children playing hopscotch. We gazed one last time to the waves of golden wheat where weathered farmers worked the land. As night reached the end morning dew cried silently for us as we said goodbye to life holding hands. |
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Free verse with some scattered near rhymes.
"Because I could not stop for Death
He kindly stopped for me
The Carriage held but just Ourselves
And Immortality." - 'Because I Could Not Stop for Death' - by Emily Dickinson
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Gypsy
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and 2 member cents. "Because I could not stop for Death
He kindly stopped for me
The Carriage held but just Ourselves
And Immortality." - 'Because I Could Not Stop for Death' - by Emily Dickinson
Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.
Gypsy
Pictures from my Pinterest account. Poems and presentations by Gypsy Blue Rose @copyright2024
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