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Senryu Suite (rules in author notes)
A chapter in the book 2024 Favorites
I Feel Your Touch
by Gypsy Blue Rose
I feel your touch when the gusty summer breeze caresses me
I'm rocked gently by trees swaying in the wind amidst dewy reeds
undress me with your blue starry eyes disrobing my translucent gown
embrace me at night when the tide comes and goes with moody waves
I feel your touch day and night by land or by sea
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SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo).
the haiku foundation senryu rules
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Gypsy
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