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Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu suite, I Feel Your Touch, has the person meeting with the gentle and firm hands of nature whenever the possibility presented itself for that communion.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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This senryu suite, I Feel Your Touch, has the person meeting with the gentle and firm hands of nature whenever the possibility presented itself for that communion.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for the excellent review. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Ulla
Oh, Marival, this is so sensual and beautifully written. It brought me back to days when this actually happened to me. What a joy that you brought back those sensual moments. Un abrazo y besitos, Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Oh, Marival, this is so sensual and beautifully written. It brought me back to days when this actually happened to me. What a joy that you brought back those sensual moments. Un abrazo y besitos, Ulla xxx
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for the exceptional six stars review, Ulla. Have a wonderful weekend.
besitos y abrazos 😊❤️
MariVal
Comment from patcelaw
This is very well written in age for listening to it very much. I am sorry I'm a bit late on reviewing this, but I have had a very bad summer cold and when I do my reviews, I have to speak them in because of my vision and when I speak, it causes me to cough so I can only do a couple pieces at a time. Patricia
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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This is very well written in age for listening to it very much. I am sorry I'm a bit late on reviewing this, but I have had a very bad summer cold and when I do my reviews, I have to speak them in because of my vision and when I speak, it causes me to cough so I can only do a couple pieces at a time. Patricia
Comment Written 28-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 28-Aug-2024
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I'm sorry, Patricia, it must be hard I appreciate your review.
Gypsy 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this very sensual poem with us. You are so wonderful at choosing the exact words to cause your readers to feel emotion. That's God given talent.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you for sharing this very sensual poem with us. You are so wonderful at choosing the exact words to cause your readers to feel emotion. That's God given talent.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Begin Again
Your words and the picture move as if it is someone who has lost her love to death, but still yearns for his touch. she finds it in the breeze and in the sky and feels it in her soul. So moving!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Your words and the picture move as if it is someone who has lost her love to death, but still yearns for his touch. she finds it in the breeze and in the sky and feels it in her soul. So moving!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Carol
Gypsy 😊
Comment from RJ Heritage
The desire to be desired is a very strong human feeling that we all share.
Well written and presented poem with good imagery.
Thank you for sharing.
RJ
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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The desire to be desired is a very strong human feeling that we all share.
Well written and presented poem with good imagery.
Thank you for sharing.
RJ
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, RJ
Gypsy 😊
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Jacob1395
I love how you conjure up so many images in your writing and it really makes it an immersive experience as I reading your poem. Another excellent piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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I love how you conjure up so many images in your writing and it really makes it an immersive experience as I reading your poem. Another excellent piece, I really enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Jacob
Gypsy 😊
Comment from EeanBlack
WOW! Part of me wants to read this poem again, and again, and again. When I lived in San Diego, I felt this way every time I felt a warm breeze. It seemed to permeate my soul, lifting it. There is something greater. Go share it. Be intimate with it. This is a very beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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WOW! Part of me wants to read this poem again, and again, and again. When I lived in San Diego, I felt this way every time I felt a warm breeze. It seemed to permeate my soul, lifting it. There is something greater. Go share it. Be intimate with it. This is a very beautiful poem.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Eeanblack
Gypsy 😊
Comment from lyenochka
You used such sensual descriptions of the narrator's recollection of how her beloved's touch is still remembered by the natural things like the wind and the sea.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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You used such sensual descriptions of the narrator's recollection of how her beloved's touch is still remembered by the natural things like the wind and the sea.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Big Sister. How are you? Taking time for yourself?
Love😊
MariVal
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Been busy with the grandkids yesterday. We took them shopping for school things - clothes, shoes, and just caught up with them to see how their first day was. Our oldest is a high schooler now! 💖
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High-schooler.... grandchildren grow so quick. My girls are 23 and 24! My grandson started early... my first grand daughter was born on 2000... she is a dragon. I'm happy you get to see them.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written post Gypsy, sensitive in all the right, the very words and music of love that speaks of the sheer beauty of touch, the nerves in our body, are meant to bring both pleasure and pain, as our emotions do the same. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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A beautifully written post Gypsy, sensitive in all the right, the very words and music of love that speaks of the sheer beauty of touch, the nerves in our body, are meant to bring both pleasure and pain, as our emotions do the same. Beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy
Gypsy 😊
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Welcome Gypsy,