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Comment from Bill Schott
This is a terrific verse that covers this imagining of dying and leaving all the sights and sounds that come together to make up our lives. Such a departure is what we all might want, barring taking our own lives.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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This is a terrific verse that covers this imagining of dying and leaving all the sights and sounds that come together to make up our lives. Such a departure is what we all might want, barring taking our own lives.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Bill. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy 😊
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Ulla
Hi Marival. You never cease to surprise me when it comes to your written words.
I simply love this free word poem, which has such lovely imagery. Un abrazo, Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Hi Marival. You never cease to surprise me when it comes to your written words.
I simply love this free word poem, which has such lovely imagery. Un abrazo, Ulla xcx
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Ulla
besitos y abrazos 😊
Comment from Nicki.B
Wow this is dark. But I love it. It's got great imagery and presentation to add to the darkness. The death carriage sounds so creepy , definitely don't want to see me of those hanging around outside my door! Lol
Well done very enjoyable
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Wow this is dark. But I love it. It's got great imagery and presentation to add to the darkness. The death carriage sounds so creepy , definitely don't want to see me of those hanging around outside my door! Lol
Well done very enjoyable
Comment Written 22-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from royowen
I think we all ponder death and what it would be like in the process, I don't know anyone who has died and came back to brush the tears away, and say, there! There! Things are fine, the bible brings some comfort though! And this is beautifully written, most loving couples believe in eternal rest in each other's arms, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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I think we all ponder death and what it would be like in the process, I don't know anyone who has died and came back to brush the tears away, and say, there! There! Things are fine, the bible brings some comfort though! And this is beautifully written, most loving couples believe in eternal rest in each other's arms, beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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Welcome
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is beautiful, Gypsy, and I love the way that your verse has been inspired by Ms Dickinson! The carriage is such a vivid image with the journey capturing all the memories shared together. Atmospheric, poignant and captivating. Thank you. Debbie
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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This is beautiful, Gypsy, and I love the way that your verse has been inspired by Ms Dickinson! The carriage is such a vivid image with the journey capturing all the memories shared together. Atmospheric, poignant and captivating. Thank you. Debbie
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much 😊 Debbie
Gypsy
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Gypsy,
I like the Emily Dickinson poem that you based your heart-wrenching on.
Your work is poignant. I can relate to this. My fiancé died in 1995 and I have had no one as understanding since. I'm alone now, but have my dog as comfort.
"Morning dew cried silently for us..." and "as we said goodbye to life."
If this is about immortality, it's great symbolism too.
Best wishes, Gypsy.
Cindy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Gypsy,
I like the Emily Dickinson poem that you based your heart-wrenching on.
Your work is poignant. I can relate to this. My fiancé died in 1995 and I have had no one as understanding since. I'm alone now, but have my dog as comfort.
"Morning dew cried silently for us..." and "as we said goodbye to life."
If this is about immortality, it's great symbolism too.
Best wishes, Gypsy.
Cindy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Cindy.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from patcelaw
One day we ourselves will be in that carriage of death. And we will be alone. I lost my husband almost 29 years ago and it almost seems like yesterday. I can still see his pleasant smile and his bright blue eyes. Patricia.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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One day we ourselves will be in that carriage of death. And we will be alone. I lost my husband almost 29 years ago and it almost seems like yesterday. I can still see his pleasant smile and his bright blue eyes. Patricia.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Patricia.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Dean Kuch is smiling down on this poem. I know he is. This poem as Dean written all over it. Thank you for sharing. I'm not really into this style of writing, but I can recognize a great poem. This is one.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Dean Kuch is smiling down on this poem. I know he is. This poem as Dean written all over it. Thank you for sharing. I'm not really into this style of writing, but I can recognize a great poem. This is one.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. I didn't think about it but you are right, Dean would like it. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review.
Gypsy 😊
Comment from Neonewman
This is one of the eeriest, romantic things I've ever heard. Darkness doesn't always have to be dark. I see that now. Beautiful work, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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This is one of the eeriest, romantic things I've ever heard. Darkness doesn't always have to be dark. I see that now. Beautiful work, Gypsy.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Steve.
Gypsy 😊
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My pleasure.
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was beautiful. Truly moving. You told a story that was more than a goodbye. It told of a lifetime of two who loved each other and were tied together throughout life and now in the final moments of life. Very Gothic and romantic. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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This was beautiful. Truly moving. You told a story that was more than a goodbye. It told of a lifetime of two who loved each other and were tied together throughout life and now in the final moments of life. Very Gothic and romantic. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much, Gretchen.
Gypsy 😊