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Five Senses Poem

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

As the Day Dims

by Gypsy Blue Rose


A New Form I Created - poem in my author notes too
 
 
I want to caress your laughter
and feel the sunshine of your soul
enveloped tightly in our love

Giggling and running by the shore
with cool sea breeze upon our backs
encouraging wind guides the steps

Sun dims and we gather our things
tucking in our passionate yearnings
midst mangos, oysters, and red wine



 
 



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Five-Senses Poem has to cover all the senses (sight, touch, smell, taste, and hearing) It's written in 3 lines stanzas with 8 syllables in each line. You may write as many stanzas as you like. It may be rhymed or free-verse. It's based on Japanese poetry composition.



I want to caress your laughter
and feel the sunshine of your soul
enveloped tightly in our love

Giggling and running by the shore
with cool sea breeze upon our backs
encouraging wind guides the steps

Sun dims and we gather our things
tucking in our passionate yearnings
midst mangos, oysters, and red wine

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Gypsy
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