General Poetry posted June 21, 2023 | Chapters: | ...301 302 -303- 304... |
Five Senses Poem
A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes
As the Day Dims
by Gypsy Blue Rose
A New Form I Created - poem in my author notes too
I want to caress your laughter
and feel the sunshine of your soul enveloped tightly in our love Giggling and running by the shore with cool sea breeze upon our backs encouraging wind guides the steps Sun dims and we gather our things tucking in our passionate yearnings midst mangos, oysters, and red wine |
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Five-Senses Poem has to cover all the senses (sight, touch, smell, taste, and hearing) It's written in 3 lines stanzas with 8 syllables in each line. You may write as many stanzas as you like. It may be rhymed or free-verse. It's based on Japanese poetry composition.
I want to caress your laughter
and feel the sunshine of your soul
enveloped tightly in our love
Giggling and running by the shore
with cool sea breeze upon our backs
encouraging wind guides the steps
Sun dims and we gather our things
tucking in our passionate yearnings
midst mangos, oysters, and red wine
Thank you for reviewing my poem :)
Gypsy
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and 2 member cents. I want to caress your laughter
and feel the sunshine of your soul
enveloped tightly in our love
Giggling and running by the shore
with cool sea breeze upon our backs
encouraging wind guides the steps
Sun dims and we gather our things
tucking in our passionate yearnings
midst mangos, oysters, and red wine
Thank you for reviewing my poem :)
Gypsy
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