General Poetry posted June 16, 2023 | Chapters: | ...300 301 -302- 303... |
3/7/3 haiku
A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes
Blue Moon Mood
by Gypsy Blue Rose
blue moon mood, raven eats the robin’s eggs — empty nest
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Empty nest = parents experience an empty nest syndrome after their children move out.
Ravens are omnivorous and will feed on everything from small mammals to nesting birds, eggs and berries.
HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one (SATORI). HAIKU uses a dash to pause before the SATORI. Haiku is about nature and it alludes to a season of the year. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) but in English is 17 syllables OR LESS because English syllables are longer than Japanese syllables. Avoid capitalization (except proper names) and punctuation. === click here to read Haiku Society of America, HAIKU EXAMPLES === click here to read Haiku Society of America HAIKU RULES === click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule === Modern Haiku
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
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and 2 member cents. Ravens are omnivorous and will feed on everything from small mammals to nesting birds, eggs and berries.
HAIKU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one (SATORI). HAIKU uses a dash to pause before the SATORI. Haiku is about nature and it alludes to a season of the year. In Japan, haiku is written in 17 syllables and three lines ( 5/7/5) but in English is 17 syllables OR LESS because English syllables are longer than Japanese syllables. Avoid capitalization (except proper names) and punctuation. === click here to read Haiku Society of America, HAIKU EXAMPLES === click here to read Haiku Society of America HAIKU RULES === click here to read why is 5/7/5 OR LESS rule === Modern Haiku
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy
pictures from pinterest
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