One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mark D. R.
GBR
Of course, robins' eggs are often bluish, which pairs nicely with your first line. The alliteration in the same works for me!
Sadly when the parent robins return to their nest, they will regret not hiring a babysitter to watch their 'flock.'
MDR
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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GBR
Of course, robins' eggs are often bluish, which pairs nicely with your first line. The alliteration in the same works for me!
Sadly when the parent robins return to their nest, they will regret not hiring a babysitter to watch their 'flock.'
MDR
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much, mark. :)
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy----and life can be tough for we all have our enemies to avoid----be it ravens or Republican law makers. Both are egg sucking bastards!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and life can be tough for we all have our enemies to avoid----be it ravens or Republican law makers. Both are egg sucking bastards!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem,
Gypsy hugs
Comment from aryr
What a great haiku, Gypsy. Although ravens do eat small mammals to nesting birds, eggs and berries, they do eat several things, don't they? Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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What a great haiku, Gypsy. Although ravens do eat small mammals to nesting birds, eggs and berries, they do eat several things, don't they? Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Hello, Aryr, how are you doing? I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are so very welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do understand the empty nest syndrome. Having raised four boys, the house is extremely quiet without them. I'm glad they left one at a time, but still... I enjoyed reading your poem. Again, a great package.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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I do understand the empty nest syndrome. Having raised four boys, the house is extremely quiet without them. I'm glad they left one at a time, but still... I enjoyed reading your poem. Again, a great package.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Hello,
how are you doing? I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from shelley kaye
the carrot didn't fill him up enough? lol
great empty nest haiku!
cool pics and the blue font works well
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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the carrot didn't fill him up enough? lol
great empty nest haiku!
cool pics and the blue font works well
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Hello,
how are you doing? I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Gypsy,
I like your symbolism in this poem.
The ravens can be the wicked in society--both people and events.
It seems parents (the robins) have to worry about "losing" their young to questionable ideals, Internet scams, bad judgment, bd bad people.
Great metaphor!
Have a nice Sunday.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Gypsy,
I like your symbolism in this poem.
The ravens can be the wicked in society--both people and events.
It seems parents (the robins) have to worry about "losing" their young to questionable ideals, Internet scams, bad judgment, bd bad people.
Great metaphor!
Have a nice Sunday.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Hello,
how are you doing? I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
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I?m well, Gypsy. I hope you are too. Your haiku?s are wonderful.
Cindy
Comment from GWHARGIS
I never knew that about the Raven. I know about ospreys. They will raid a nest and eat the eggs. They will eat fish or snakes. I don't think there is much that isn't on their menu. This poem made me a little sad. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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I never knew that about the Raven. I know about ospreys. They will raid a nest and eat the eggs. They will eat fish or snakes. I don't think there is much that isn't on their menu. This poem made me a little sad. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Hello,
how are you doing? I hope you are having a wonderful weekend. Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Oh dear - it's another hungry raven poem! I like the double-entendre of the "empty nest" phrase. Although when people have "empty nests", it's more a relief.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Oh dear - it's another hungry raven poem! I like the double-entendre of the "empty nest" phrase. Although when people have "empty nests", it's more a relief.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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I was very sad when my children moved out but that's life. Now I'm lucky to live with my daughter, Micaela. I see the other two a few times a year.
Thank you, big sister (*÷*) Love you.
Marival ❤️
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
Virtual Six Stars! Its a little dark for me if I like it. We had a robin nest on our ceiling fan on the back patio and the mommy fed the babies now we don't see them. Hmm?? Exceptional work Gypsy!! :)) Alexan
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Virtual Six Stars! Its a little dark for me if I like it. We had a robin nest on our ceiling fan on the back patio and the mommy fed the babies now we don't see them. Hmm?? Exceptional work Gypsy!! :)) Alexan
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Alexan,
Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind
MariVal. :)
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was a beautiful haiku, Gypsy, written with a hand of a master as usual. Loved the image and presentation.
I dont' know, maybe it's me - but your font color on that background was jarring to my eyes. Perhaps the lighter shade of text font would bring up the presentation.
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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This was a beautiful haiku, Gypsy, written with a hand of a master as usual. Loved the image and presentation.
I dont' know, maybe it's me - but your font color on that background was jarring to my eyes. Perhaps the lighter shade of text font would bring up the presentation.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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I changed the font color to a lighter blue, thank you for the suggestion.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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It's great now! I can see the text very clearly.
