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5/5/7/6 Zen Naani Poem
A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes
On An Empty Road
by Gypsy Blue Rose
on an empty road,
I walk with the moon as my only companion — tulips full of sadness |
This naani poem is zen because it has a satori (last line) of enlightenment.
NAANI POEM is an Indian poetic form. It's very similar to Japanese Poetry in that it's succinct, syllable count based, and imagistic. It's usually about nature or human relations but not strictly. The lines are grammatically connected and never rhyme. === click here for examples -poetrysoup === click here for more information- shadowpoetry === click here for more information === poetry soup
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and 2 member cents. NAANI POEM is an Indian poetic form. It's very similar to Japanese Poetry in that it's succinct, syllable count based, and imagistic. It's usually about nature or human relations but not strictly. The lines are grammatically connected and never rhyme. === click here for examples -poetrysoup === click here for more information- shadowpoetry === click here for more information === poetry soup
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