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Korean Sijo Poem

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Your Moody Tides

by Gypsy Blue Rose


Dedicated to Helen (Lyenochka)
 
 
Your moody tides
tear me apart,
sometimes you ebb
and others you thrust.

Will you ever stay
by my side?

I look up to heaven
to wish upon a star.
"I want her to be my wife".


 

 




"Love gives naught but itself and takes naught but from itself. Love possesses not nor would it be possessed; For love is sufficient unto love. And think not you can direct the course of love, if it finds you worthy, directs your course. Love has no other desire but to fulfill itself." -Kahill Gibran

Ebb is the tidal phase during which the tidal current is flowing seaward. Flood tide pulls to land.

SIJO poem is a traditional Korean poetic form related to haiku and tanka. Traditionally, a Sijo is comprised of 44-46 syllables OR LESS. Originally intended as songs, sijo can be romantic, metaphysical, reflection, or spiritual themes. Whatever the subject, the first line introduces an idea or story, the second supplies a "turn," and the third provides closure. The pattern is not strict but it has to be 46 syllables o less. Theme 3,4,4,4 = 1st stanza/Elaboration 3,4,4,4 = 2nd stanza/Counter Theme 3,5. 3rd stanza/Completion 4,3 = 4th stanza Sijo Form Definition

Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus






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