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2/7/5 Senryu

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

New Moon

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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new moon 
    enveloped in starless night —
the love you don't see
 
 




A New Moon is invisible. It's when the Sun and Moon are aligned, with the Sun and Earth on opposite sides of the Moon. Nov 23, 2022 at 2:57 pm

SENRYU is a Japanese poetic form similar to haiku. It's written in 3 lines with 17 syllables OR LESS usually in a shot/long/short form. Senryu is about human foibles while haiku tend to be about nature. Senryu doesn't need a season word (kigo) but it's okay if you do. It never rhymes. It uses imagery.

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collection of senryu


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"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
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