One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, beautiful presentation. I love the forget-me-not flower. That use to be my FS photo--then I got cancer and said what the heck, and I put my photo up. I like how you associate moods to the tides--good analogy.
Of special note:
Will you ever stay
by my side?
(If only)
Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. Sorry that I'm so behind on my reviewing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Hi Gypsy, beautiful presentation. I love the forget-me-not flower. That use to be my FS photo--then I got cancer and said what the heck, and I put my photo up. I like how you associate moods to the tides--good analogy.
Of special note:
Will you ever stay
by my side?
(If only)
Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. Sorry that I'm so behind on my reviewing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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I am so thankful that you survived cancer and you are here with us. I always appreciate your beautiful and kind reviews! I am glad you decided to use your real picture for your profile, you are a beautiful woman.
Gypsy hugs
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Oh thank you. That photo was taken about a year or so after my cancer. It's now about 5 years old. Xo. M
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Very well-written and beautifully presented.
I like the ebb and flow of moods. As one who admits my moods sometimes hit the shore a little to quick, I can identify with the words.
Mary
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Very well-written and beautifully presented.
I like the ebb and flow of moods. As one who admits my moods sometimes hit the shore a little to quick, I can identify with the words.
Mary
Comment Written 05-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your SIJO poem- excellent picture presentation- subject Moody Moon tides? Ebb and flow- yen and Yang perhaps- uncertainty- want her to be my wife- will we ever be one together- woman in the picture speaking in the poem- I like you notes - one of my favorites- 'love will not be possessed' good job
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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I like your SIJO poem- excellent picture presentation- subject Moody Moon tides? Ebb and flow- yen and Yang perhaps- uncertainty- want her to be my wife- will we ever be one together- woman in the picture speaking in the poem- I like you notes - one of my favorites- 'love will not be possessed' good job
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your exceptional review and kind words.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem caused me to smile because of my FanStory constant reviewers, he's been with me for years, mentioned one time that I'm 'definitely a moody female.' Hmmm, makes me wonder. I know it was the moon tides, right?
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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This poem caused me to smile because of my FanStory constant reviewers, he's been with me for years, mentioned one time that I'm 'definitely a moody female.' Hmmm, makes me wonder. I know it was the moon tides, right?
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Yes, moon tides. It's okay to be moody. Whenever women express feelings we are labeled as moody as if it was a bad word. In the 40s, Dr. Walter Freeman and Dr. James W. Watts performed lobotomy on women and children for children tantrums and women moods....sometimes for depression but not all. I'm so happy I don't live in that barbarian time.
Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate you.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from Mike Stevens
Another fine poem, Gypsy....any any poem the uses the word "trust" has to be good, no? And "moody tides," could be describing my ex-wife, although "trust" makes me think otherwise!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Another fine poem, Gypsy....any any poem the uses the word "trust" has to be good, no? And "moody tides," could be describing my ex-wife, although "trust" makes me think otherwise!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
Those moods do make consistent and close loving hard to maintain. Your sijo poem made me think of the moon's effect on women and their menstrual cycles as PMS does affect moods!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Those moods do make consistent and close loving hard to maintain. Your sijo poem made me think of the moon's effect on women and their menstrual cycles as PMS does affect moods!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much, big sister. I always appreciate your insightful feedback and helpful reviews. Love you.
Marival
Comment from royowen
Of course the 1 Corinthians 13 definition of love is the unconditionality of love, which is the only truly valid one, love seems to take many forms, but the truly giving all one, expecting nothing in return, is the right one. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Of course the 1 Corinthians 13 definition of love is the unconditionality of love, which is the only truly valid one, love seems to take many forms, but the truly giving all one, expecting nothing in return, is the right one. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 04-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2022
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Roy, thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
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Most welcome
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Well done