Comment from angel123

Excellent

Wow! What a poem. Well written and it held my attention. It flows well with an entertaining story. Happy Holidays.

Angel 123

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016

Thank you,

That was a nice review. I appreciate it.

Always,

luna

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

A very good nonet that reminds me of the isolation and the desolation of some places and some people. I think there are lots of nobody's children that we may never know about. Marilyn

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016

Dear Marilyn,

Thanks for reading my poem, I appreciate your gracious review.

Always,

luna

Comment from closetpoetjester

Excellent

Hmmm, not sure what you're gonna find at a truck stop late at night except a whole lotta cowboy trouble LOL Still, when you're nobody's child and you're walking alone, you're probably up for anything.
This had a melancholy but hopeful feel to it as it descended down the page and disappeared into the night. Nicely done...hope she found what she was looking for.
Cheers P

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016

closetpoetjester, thanks for reading and for your fun review. I appreciate it.

Always,

luna

Comment from ArtGal

Excellent

Gosh, reading this made me sad. So many questions too, like where is her family and why would she need to find love at a truck stop. What is her age and will she always have to wander. Great writing though, and the best of luck in this contest...Sharon

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2016

Dear Sharon,

Thanks for reading this and for your interesting review. I'm not sure how old she is, probably late twenties, and I believe
She won't wander all her life, but she will wander for a long, long, time.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This nonet, Nobody's Child, uses the correct format and reminds us of those who are on their own and trying to make it in a dog eat dog world. The image of a 'truck stop that time forgot' adds to the lonely sense of the work.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016

Thank you so much, Bill, for reading and reviewing my work. I appreciate your kind and sensitive comments.
Merry Christmas,
luna

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

What a sad story--and too often a true story. Too often, in syllable-restricted poems the words seem forced to fit the lines. In this case the story has an easy flow.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016

Thank you for your review and comments. I'm so happy that you found this Nonet to have an easy flor=q

Merry Christmas,
luna

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Nicely done on the nonet with nobody's child, more like looking for love in all the wrong places. Good luck on this and have a great day

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016

Thanks, Bill, for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed this, and happy day to you as well!

Merry Christmas,
luna

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

A search for love has filled the pages of many romance book. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good book.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016

Thanks so much for your gracious review, Charlie. I always appreciate your attention to my portfolio of work.


Merry Christmas,
luna

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Many a young girl has found herself in a heap of problems roaming the streets and the truck stops. I enjoyed the poem and wish you luck in the contest. Patricia

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016

Thanks so very much, Patricia, for the read, review, comments and for your attention to my poem. I appreciate it.


Merry Christmas,

jeni

Comment from jusylee72

Excellent

This poem I can once again picture that young girl in search of something to get her away from the boredom of small town living. Very intersting choice of poem and picture.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Dec-2016

Thanks you one more time for the kind read, review and comments. I appreciate your continued attention to my work.


Merry Christmas,
jeni