A Simple Flower
Just give. Never worry about the outcome.14 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry
Nice sentiment. Pretty picture. haven't seen you much lately. I hope you are okay. Lots of people are having problems lately. It is all the bad weather we had. I am writing a lot more now. Winter had me mowed down.
Good work. Karen
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Nice sentiment. Pretty picture. haven't seen you much lately. I hope you are okay. Lots of people are having problems lately. It is all the bad weather we had. I am writing a lot more now. Winter had me mowed down.
Good work. Karen
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Thanks. Just the blues. I’ll be okay.
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Winter blues blows. Karen
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Lol
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We can see the sun now. :-)
Comment from June Sargent
There is more joy in giving than in receiving. And sometimes the outcome is more than we could dream of. Just listen to your heart and keep on giving. It will touch someone's heart when you least expect it.
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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There is more joy in giving than in receiving. And sometimes the outcome is more than we could dream of. Just listen to your heart and keep on giving. It will touch someone's heart when you least expect it.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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True. Thank you.
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True. Thank you.
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Eean,
This is a beautiful poem. It is full of emotion and you can feel it coming off the page. I told you before that you were a big romantic. LOL
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Eean,
This is a beautiful poem. It is full of emotion and you can feel it coming off the page. I told you before that you were a big romantic. LOL
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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And you are still so wrong, lol.
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I'm not I see it in your poems. You will never find me writing a poem like that. Ha, Ha
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No you are too happy.
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Being happy is a good thing. That's what happens when you have a twisted mind
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No that when you go to a place and STAY a while.
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I'm a lunatic didn't you know that. 😂
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Eean.
This is nice short but sweet love poem. It shows your love and hope for the future. You're poem description gives good advice.
That is a beautiful flower illustrating your words.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a tremendous weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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Hi Eean.
This is nice short but sweet love poem. It shows your love and hope for the future. You're poem description gives good advice.
That is a beautiful flower illustrating your words.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a tremendous weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 29-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2025
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I will. Thank you.
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Good. No problem.
Joan
Comment from royowen
There's a lot to be said for those that come alongside those that do not have the confidence to stay afloat on the platform the provide for themselves, it's not easy to be doubtful of oneself. I think we all need a crutch at times, as long as we realise we're not alone, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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There's a lot to be said for those that come alongside those that do not have the confidence to stay afloat on the platform the provide for themselves, it's not easy to be doubtful of oneself. I think we all need a crutch at times, as long as we realise we're not alone, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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It’s not so serious as that, but you do get it. Thanks.
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Well done
Comment from patcelaw
This is a beautifully written OMto someone you love and I very much enjoyed reading it. It also flows very well when it is really loud. May you have a wonderful weekend and God bless you.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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This is a beautifully written OMto someone you love and I very much enjoyed reading it. It also flows very well when it is really loud. May you have a wonderful weekend and God bless you.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Thank you.
Comment from Tim Margetts
This is a really enjoyable short poem Eean.
The way you express love to your rose, express your desire that she is happy and lives her best dreams and that in that you will become part of that dream.
A nice musical quality in how it reads ties up this poem nicely
Tim
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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This is a really enjoyable short poem Eean.
The way you express love to your rose, express your desire that she is happy and lives her best dreams and that in that you will become part of that dream.
A nice musical quality in how it reads ties up this poem nicely
Tim
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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A poem is a poem. Thanks.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I really liked
the words above the title! I found them to be good advice and filled
with humility! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect
and compliments this poem well.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I really liked
the words above the title! I found them to be good advice and filled
with humility! The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is perfect
and compliments this poem well.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Thank you.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
There's a romantic inside of you. How he got there, i'll never know. lol But seriously, this is lovely and it reads so smoothly with the flow of the words and the rhyme. Keep writing this kind. I'll keep enjoying.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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There's a romantic inside of you. How he got there, i'll never know. lol But seriously, this is lovely and it reads so smoothly with the flow of the words and the rhyme. Keep writing this kind. I'll keep enjoying.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Your first three lines were perfect.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
I enjoyed reading your excellent poem. Your words are clear and easy to comprehend. You use vivid imagery descriptions that support your theme. This is very creative, thought provoking, and imaginative with a selfless, caring message.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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I enjoyed reading your excellent poem. Your words are clear and easy to comprehend. You use vivid imagery descriptions that support your theme. This is very creative, thought provoking, and imaginative with a selfless, caring message.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 28-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Thanks. I changed some of the words at a friend's suggestion. I like it better now.
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I'll reread. You're we!
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It's still good. :)
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thanks.
