Hey, Bozo Nose!
A 150 Word Flash Fiction Story3 total reviews
Comment from Jill McCauslin
I don't know if this is supposed to be funny but it made me laugh. The title is amusing and mixed in with the nose comments, it was humorous.
If she can't move anything above her neck, the rest of her body should be fine so she could move the cat and dial the phone. It is rather dark regardless. I liked it a lot.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I don't know if this is supposed to be funny but it made me laugh. The title is amusing and mixed in with the nose comments, it was humorous.
If she can't move anything above her neck, the rest of her body should be fine so she could move the cat and dial the phone. It is rather dark regardless. I liked it a lot.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Hahahaha, Jill!!!! Only YOU would catch that stupid mistake. I think the vast majority of reviewers on FanStory are just reviewing to make FanStory dollars so that they can promote their own work. Thanks for your oh so reliable eye and as always your sense of humor. We missed you yesterday. I'm still laughing out loud. Going to edit that now. lol.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your story pulled me in right away. I loved how you used short sentences to make each moment feel even heavier. The way you brought in Felix was terrific - it said so much without needing extra words. This was dark - but in the best way possible. You have a real gift for making every word count!
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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Your story pulled me in right away. I loved how you used short sentences to make each moment feel even heavier. The way you brought in Felix was terrific - it said so much without needing extra words. This was dark - but in the best way possible. You have a real gift for making every word count!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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Thank you for these kind words, Michael. So appreciated.
Comment from patcelaw
This was nicely written for the flash fiction and also it's a very nicely written work for your 200 post. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also wish you a very wonderful evening. And may you have a terrific weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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This was nicely written for the flash fiction and also it's a very nicely written work for your 200 post. I wish you the very best with your writing. I also wish you a very wonderful evening. And may you have a terrific weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2025
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Thank you so much, Patricia!
