One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are sad words and we rely on our senses to remind us of someone who is no longer there and I remember keeping some personal items belonging to my husband, because of the smell, but the smells eventually fade when someone is no longer with us, a poignant write filled with memories here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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These are sad words and we rely on our senses to remind us of someone who is no longer there and I remember keeping some personal items belonging to my husband, because of the smell, but the smells eventually fade when someone is no longer with us, a poignant write filled with memories here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Sugarray77
Wonderfully written, but, oh so heartbreaking. The fact that she kept the shirt just breaks my heart. A wonderfully emotive poem, Gypsy, and your use of delicate phrasing gives it depth and resonance. Well done.
Melissa
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Wonderfully written, but, oh so heartbreaking. The fact that she kept the shirt just breaks my heart. A wonderfully emotive poem, Gypsy, and your use of delicate phrasing gives it depth and resonance. Well done.
Melissa
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Melissa. I'm glad you like it. :)
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Comment from Ricky1024
This was well presented, rich in Theme and Imagery.
Calvin works for me.
And as for Aremis?
Chanel knows with her Number 5.
While Buebbery?
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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This was well presented, rich in Theme and Imagery.
Calvin works for me.
And as for Aremis?
Chanel knows with her Number 5.
While Buebbery?
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thank you very much, dr Ricky. I'm glad you like it. :)
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Comment from Ginda Simpson
First, thanks for introducing me to this CHOKA poetry form. I shall have to try it. Secondly, thanks for offering a great poem as an example. Your words are very evocative, the sense of loss and longing as one struggles to accept. Very moving.
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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First, thanks for introducing me to this CHOKA poetry form. I shall have to try it. Secondly, thanks for offering a great poem as an example. Your words are very evocative, the sense of loss and longing as one struggles to accept. Very moving.
Comment Written 24-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
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Thank you, Ginda, I appreciate your exceptional review and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from patcelaw
This is beautifully worded and present it. I enjoyed it very much it is a rather sad though. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May your day be blessed. Patricia
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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This is beautifully worded and present it. I enjoyed it very much it is a rather sad though. I wish you the very best with all of your writing. May your day be blessed. Patricia
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from royowen
A lot of relationships like this seem to happen, and I certainly have been guilty of one or two myself. But I turned out ok...I think. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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A lot of relationships like this seem to happen, and I certainly have been guilty of one or two myself. But I turned out ok...I think. Beautifully written Gypsy, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your positive review and feedback.
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Most welcome Gypsy
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The imagination in this poem is written very romantic. This morning I was listening to someone speak about keeping clothes so they can fantasize. Perhaps this poem brings that to surface.
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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The imagination in this poem is written very romantic. This morning I was listening to someone speak about keeping clothes so they can fantasize. Perhaps this poem brings that to surface.
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Rosemary. I appreciate your positive review and feedback.
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Comment from GWHARGIS
Gutwrenching heartbreak. First words that come to mind with this. I see a woman who clings to whatever she can of a lost live. The scent of Obsession leading to thoughts of broken passion from the past. Great job. Gretchen
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Gutwrenching heartbreak. First words that come to mind with this. I see a woman who clings to whatever she can of a lost live. The scent of Obsession leading to thoughts of broken passion from the past. Great job. Gretchen
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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yes, you got it
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I prefer to think of this lost love was lost to death and not to a failed relationship. The romance part of me likes that better. Even in death we cling to shirts and thoughts of the loved one. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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I prefer to think of this lost love was lost to death and not to a failed relationship. The romance part of me likes that better. Even in death we cling to shirts and thoughts of the loved one. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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I know what you mean. When my mother died, I was ten, I clang to my mother's clothes and pillow because they still smelled like her.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem.
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Comment from Bill Schott
This choka, Safe Haven Embrace, has the proper formatting and seems to reflect a failed relationship haunted by the comfortable clothing which remains as a safety blanket.
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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This choka, Safe Haven Embrace, has the proper formatting and seems to reflect a failed relationship haunted by the comfortable clothing which remains as a safety blanket.
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your positive review and helpful feedback.
Gypsy