Comment from aryr

Excellent

This was a great sijo, Gypsy. The dual pictures were fantastic, the idea of the couple on the beach as it broke waves over them was simply amazing. Your great word spoke of a love deeper than deep. Blessed Be n Hugs!!!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thank you very much! Have a wonderful day. Blessed be.

Gypsy hugs

reply by aryr on 27-Apr-2023

You are so welcome, Gypsy.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Your word choices caused rich imagery as I read. The descriptions were perfect. I loved the way you compared it to the sea. Thank you for sharing this beautiful package with us.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thank you, Barabara. I am happy you like this tanka. May you have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

Beautiful and deep
Well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
May use this as a pick up line?
Anywho thanks for sharing this and have a great day.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thank you, guapa. I am happy you like this tanka. May you have a wonderful day.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Marival, Oh my sweet friend...
if only I could go back to those days...
a time when I lived in Florida...and
the nights I spent on the beach...with
someone I loved...sigh...

I have never heard of this form...
but I like it...I love your poem...
and love the picture...very nicely written...
Love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thank you very much, Linda. I hope you are well. xoxox

Gypsy hugs

reply by l.raven on 27-Apr-2023

your so very welcome sweet girl...

I'm am doing well...
and I hope you are too...
take care and be safe...God Bless...love xxoo

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

This sijo poem shows the complete immersion into the passionate embrace with the beloved one. I love that it goes from the physical to the spiritual that the passion goes to the "sea" of the loved one's soul.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thank you, big sister. Yes, you are right. I hope you are doing well.

Love,
Marival ❤️

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

ooh i love the second stanza with the night eyes and starry skies!! very cool imagery!

a great sijo poem with a totally cool pic
smooth flow and sensual word choices

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023

Thank you very much.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a beautiful thought. I enjoyed it very much. Your presentation is beautiful. I wish you the very best in all of your writing. May you have a wonderful evening and a good tomorrow. Patricia.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Am absolutely beautiful Sijo, Gypsy, reads like a romance novella. You combined a beauty of love with the beauty of the sea - and the effect is stunning.

An award winning presentation.

I feel drowned in a sea of love, reading this (smile).

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Apr-2023

Drowned in love sounds wonderful. :) I'm happy you like the presentation, it means a lot to me.

Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

Gypsy hugs