One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your haiku poem- nice picture presentation tying to the poem perfectly- poem to me makes good use of metaphors- pain and suffering in life contrasted with innocence- Good Job AP
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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I like your haiku poem- nice picture presentation tying to the poem perfectly- poem to me makes good use of metaphors- pain and suffering in life contrasted with innocence- Good Job AP
Comment Written 23-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Mary Vigasin
What an inspiring Haiku. it is one that gives hope to those whose lives are torn by war or natural disasters.
Truly. a beautiful Hiku in words and presentation.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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What an inspiring Haiku. it is one that gives hope to those whose lives are torn by war or natural disasters.
Truly. a beautiful Hiku in words and presentation.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from kahpot
What a wonderful image, yes everything can grow and start again after a tragedy, an inspirational read, we are resilient, very well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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What a wonderful image, yes everything can grow and start again after a tragedy, an inspirational read, we are resilient, very well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I was in our local grocery store early this morning. Inside it is a flower shop. I always take a stroll through. This morning the beautiful daisies caught my eye. They always viewed them as a simple flower, but for some reason, today, for the first time, I realized how absolutely beautiful they are. I know you have sunflowers in this photo, which is beautiful too, but your poem brought me back to the daisies. Yes, I'm strange.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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I was in our local grocery store early this morning. Inside it is a flower shop. I always take a stroll through. This morning the beautiful daisies caught my eye. They always viewed them as a simple flower, but for some reason, today, for the first time, I realized how absolutely beautiful they are. I know you have sunflowers in this photo, which is beautiful too, but your poem brought me back to the daisies. Yes, I'm strange.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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I wanted daisies but the sunflower pictures were prettier. Any flower would be good but daisies are very pretty.
Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A perfect Haiku made all the more profound by the artistic effects of the
background.
Each carefully chosen word was a perfect fit.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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A perfect Haiku made all the more profound by the artistic effects of the
background.
Each carefully chosen word was a perfect fit.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time and the exceptional six stars review. You are very kind.
Gypsy hugs
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You're welcome.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Flowers" is a 6/7/4 Haiku rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Note: Sunflowers are known as a sign of friendship.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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"Flowers" is a 6/7/4 Haiku rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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Note: Sunflowers are known as a sign of friendship.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 22-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
That picture of the sunflower reminds me of the attack on Ukraine. Yes, their spirits are strong and they will not be bullied by Putin's madness. Lovely poem!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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That picture of the sunflower reminds me of the attack on Ukraine. Yes, their spirits are strong and they will not be bullied by Putin's madness. Lovely poem!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2023
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I was thinking of Ukraine and the earthquake in turkey and Syria
Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. I'm happy you like it.
Love,
Marival ❤️
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Comment from aryr
What a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. The dual picture was amazing with the two daisies amid all the rubble. Your words seemed to tie it all together. The second picture just added the finishing touch. Blessed be n hugs!!!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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What a beautiful haiku, Gypsy. The dual picture was amazing with the two daisies amid all the rubble. Your words seemed to tie it all together. The second picture just added the finishing touch. Blessed be n hugs!!!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Aryr, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day. Blessed be.
Gypsy hugs
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You are most welcome, Gypsy.
Comment from Tammy Gould
I love this. It demonstrates the resilience of flowers and it also relates to life. We can either be joyful amidst the ruble or not. It's our choice. We need to learn from nature. Very well done.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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I love this. It demonstrates the resilience of flowers and it also relates to life. We can either be joyful amidst the ruble or not. It's our choice. We need to learn from nature. Very well done.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Tammy, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, it's amazing where you may find a flower or a tree grow. I remember living in NYC, and a tree was growing between the cracks of the sidewalk. Where the tree came from was a mystery??? The tree did not survive. Someone plucked it out. Great photo choice. Daisies are warm and welcoming flowers. Well done. Xo. M
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Hi Gypsy, it's amazing where you may find a flower or a tree grow. I remember living in NYC, and a tree was growing between the cracks of the sidewalk. Where the tree came from was a mystery??? The tree did not survive. Someone plucked it out. Great photo choice. Daisies are warm and welcoming flowers. Well done. Xo. M
Comment Written 21-Feb-2023
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2023
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Thank you, Margaret, I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful day.
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