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Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your haiku modern- good picture presentation and flow- notes provide excellent information- mama moth with 400 eggs - human females have nothing to complain about!! Lol Good Job

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
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Oooh! Those are so cool! And those nocturnal insects do a lot for pollinating plants that bloom at night. I like that you use both "moon" and "luna" in tis poem.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much, big sister, I'm so happy you like it. I like this type of moth, it looks like a butterfly.

    Love,

    Marival ❤️
Comment from aryr
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This was a wonderful haiku, Gypsy. I can only imagine that something to do with the moon can definitely take over anything. Including a luna moth. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessed be n hugs!

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback. Blessed be.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Ricky1024
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The lesser moon we need to crescent moon lunar moth all work well with this haiku..
Rich in Theme and Imagery with nice Art.
This also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for your time, kind review, and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I have never heard of a luna moth. I'll have to research it. Thank you for peeking my interesting. Often your poems have caused me to search out new information. Thank you for that. Not only is your presentation fascinating you cause new learning.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023


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Comment from karenina
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Some years ago I was visiting my daughter and saw this most beautiful creature alight on her porch railing, within the glow of her porch light.
I had not encountered something so ethereal and did not know "Luna Moth" existed. That is the only one I've ever seen ~ and your wonderful 3/7/3 haiku brings back the thrill of that night!

Karenina



 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
    Karenina,

    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by karenina on 13-Feb-2023
    My pleasure...
Comment from patcelaw
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Luna moth a very interesting moth. I do wish you the very best in all that you do. May God bless you and keep you in his care. Blessings always. Patricia.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. May God bless you too. (*÷*)

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from mermaids
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I like the image and feel of your words. It is like the moon and the luna moth are lovers. There is a romantic feel in your haiku form through a clear picture of nature.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2023


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2023
    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy hugs