One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mark Schardine
True enough, someone may have tried to warn you from the outset that he was bad for you, but somehow he persuaded you. Even now, you wonder how it happened.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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True enough, someone may have tried to warn you from the outset that he was bad for you, but somehow he persuaded you. Even now, you wonder how it happened.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your tim, kind review, and helpfull feedback.
Gypsy Word Weaver
"Art Imitating Life, Life Imitating Art"
Comment from Teri7
Gypsy, This is a very good and well written senyru you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Gypsy, This is a very good and well written senyru you have penned. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work you chose. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart and soul
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you are so welcome my friend!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Oh my!! This poem shows emotion of an old love. I wonder how many of us have memories of a high school or college boyfriend? I know I do. If I still had those letters/notes, we wrote to each other they would be filled with love. Thank you for the memories.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Oh my!! This poem shows emotion of an old love. I wonder how many of us have memories of a high school or college boyfriend? I know I do. If I still had those letters/notes, we wrote to each other they would be filled with love. Thank you for the memories.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review.
Gypsy Word Weaver
Art is the language of the heart and soul
Comment from lyenochka
This shows the profound pain and hurt of the love letters which show a different person or personality at a different time of life. The love letters just gather dust but the narrator can't forget.
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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This shows the profound pain and hurt of the love letters which show a different person or personality at a different time of life. The love letters just gather dust but the narrator can't forget.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2022
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Yes, you got it. (*÷*) Thank you, big sister. I hope you are having a great night.
Love,
Marival
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Senryu poem - Excellent picture presentation - I would love to have such an attic! Word count and flow is good - story if clear and easy to understand painting a clear picture and point - well done! The people we thought they were, and remember them to be at the beginning - quite a different story for me as well. The ignorance of youth I suppose? Good Job. AP
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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I like your Senryu poem - Excellent picture presentation - I would love to have such an attic! Word count and flow is good - story if clear and easy to understand painting a clear picture and point - well done! The people we thought they were, and remember them to be at the beginning - quite a different story for me as well. The ignorance of youth I suppose? Good Job. AP
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, review, and helpfull feedback
Gypsy
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, this is an interesting poem. Good imagery. I can see it.
Of special ntoe:
the man I thought you were
(Hmmm -- much to ponder there.)
Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Hi Gypsy, this is an interesting poem. Good imagery. I can see it.
Of special ntoe:
the man I thought you were
(Hmmm -- much to ponder there.)
Well done. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Margaret. Many men are very romantic at the beginning but sooner or latter the romance ends. For some, it changes into a comfortable loving relationship, but for others it's a bad change.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from Ricky1024
"Old Love Poems"
This is a Senryu rich in Theme and Imagery.
Based on lost love.
Dust in the addict.
Cobwebs from a Lost Love, Long, Long,Ago.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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"Old Love Poems"
This is a Senryu rich in Theme and Imagery.
Based on lost love.
Dust in the addict.
Cobwebs from a Lost Love, Long, Long,Ago.
Thanks for sharing.
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, review, and helpfull feedback
Gypsy
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Great poem. What can one say which touches and moves the heart in seventeen syllables? This senyu does it with great style. There's a mountain of feelings and rivers of emotion underlying the poem
Great job!
Mario
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Great poem. What can one say which touches and moves the heart in seventeen syllables? This senyu does it with great style. There's a mountain of feelings and rivers of emotion underlying the poem
Great job!
Mario
Comment Written 18-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time, review, and helpfull feedback
Gypsy