One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Mark Schardine
What we cannot see at this time, but must see later, will have an impact which we cannot imagine right now. In fact, it may happen very soon, sooner that we expect.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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What we cannot see at this time, but must see later, will have an impact which we cannot imagine right now. In fact, it may happen very soon, sooner that we expect.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Mark
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
Hmm, I never thought of the new moon being a starless night. I wonder why. Hmm, but I guess it's true. We know they're there, so why not the love. I think I need to figure this out. LOL Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Hmm, I never thought of the new moon being a starless night. I wonder why. Hmm, but I guess it's true. We know they're there, so why not the love. I think I need to figure this out. LOL Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Hello, Barbara, the new moon is invisible and the stars could be hard to see through clouds or smog. Thank you for the fine review.
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
I love the final line, the love you don't see. Hello Gypsy! I am looking through my list of those I am following and found this Senryu among those. I hope you are well and having a good time this season of autumn.
Have a happy week!
Jesse
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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I love the final line, the love you don't see. Hello Gypsy! I am looking through my list of those I am following and found this Senryu among those. I hope you are well and having a good time this season of autumn.
Have a happy week!
Jesse
Comment Written 07-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 07-Nov-2022
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Thank you, Jesse, it's good to hear from you and you sound in very good spirits. I'm well. I appreciate your excellent and kind review. Have a nice day.
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Glad to hear it!
Thanks for the gypsy hugs!
Jesse
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting. It's a "starless" night so we don't see the "new moon" or the stars. But we still know they are there and the lights are hidden by perhaps a cloudy night. Sometimes, we don't always see the "love" expressed verbally or in actions, but we know it's there.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Interesting. It's a "starless" night so we don't see the "new moon" or the stars. But we still know they are there and the lights are hidden by perhaps a cloudy night. Sometimes, we don't always see the "love" expressed verbally or in actions, but we know it's there.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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That's true. It's hard for some people to show love even if they feel it. Thank you very much, big sister! Love you.
Marival ❤️
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I know people like that! My parents were definitely like that with each other. Sigh.
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Comment from AP Apgar
I like your Senryu poem- looking for the moon in the presentation - after reading the notes realized it was a starless night- hello! Learn something new every day- thank you- you're so smart! Good job
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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I like your Senryu poem- looking for the moon in the presentation - after reading the notes realized it was a starless night- hello! Learn something new every day- thank you- you're so smart! Good job
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.
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Comment from prettybluebirds
You do come up with some of the most beautiful poetry. You almost make me want to try it. I grew up in the fifties and all these different poetry forms were unknown, at least to me. I love your writing.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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You do come up with some of the most beautiful poetry. You almost make me want to try it. I grew up in the fifties and all these different poetry forms were unknown, at least to me. I love your writing.
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much, Prettybluebirds, you are very kind. I wish you a lovely enjoyable day. If you ever want to try it out, I have two clubs. You are welcome to join us.
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Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Gypsy, I like this. Well done. Thought provoking:
the love you don't see
(strong than the love by your side)
Great photo choice. Good sensory appeal. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Hi Gypsy, I like this. Well done. Thought provoking:
the love you don't see
(strong than the love by your side)
Great photo choice. Good sensory appeal. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 06-Nov-2022
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2022
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Thank you very much, Margaret. You are very kind.
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