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Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine poem, Gypsy----and doesn't it just feel this way, problems do pitter-patter on the old umbella, and somethimes there IS no umbrella and you get drenched

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I have feeling the 'knee-deep in the blues' isn't a description of how deep the water is, of course living in Florida or South Carolina, it could be, but I have a feeling it's appealing to our emotions. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
    Knee deep in the blilue (music and sadness.. double meaning.

    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, another great poem. This poem is filled with good imagery and high sensory appeal. I especially liked:

knee-deep in the blues.
(both visual and emotional)

Well done. Another beautiful photo. Where do you get them? A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. Margaret ~ LateBloomer

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
    Margaret, I get most of my pictures from google...GOOGLE I search for whatever the poem is about and from the top tool bar I chose IMAGES...then I chose the one i like. I also use DEVIANTART.COM and PINTEREST.COM

    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by LateBloomer on 01-Oct-2022
    Are these photo without copywrite? I'm never sure what I can safely use, so I usually stick to FanArt which is limited. Thank you for getting back to me. Xo. M
reply by the author on 02-Oct-2022
    Yes, Google are public domain, they are not copywrite. Pinterst are also not copywrite, they are made special to share.
Comment from lyenochka
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That's sad to be "knee deep in the blues." That's a LOT of rain - like in Florida and South Carolina now. I liked your use of assonance (knee-deep) and onomatopoeia (pitter-patter).

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2022

reply by the author on 01-Oct-2022
    Thank you, big sister. I'm glad you like it. Have a wonderful weekend!

    Love,

    Marival ❤️
Comment from Mark D. R.
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Gypsy,

Very nice entry for your Water Haiku club entry.

I can hear/sense that pitter-patter of your raindrops. Your last line is a good contrast for your first two lines. Good use of the artwork to pair with your verse.

Mark

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2022

reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Hugs!

    Gypsy
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your Haiku poem- excellent picture presentation- she definitely looks blue on a rainy day- poem has a good flow- and connect between lines- good job

 Comment Written 30-Sep-2022

reply by the author on 30-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much for your time and kind review and helpfull feedback. Hugs!

    Gypsy