General Poetry posted September 30, 2022 Chapters:  ...138 139 -140- 141... 


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4/8/5 Modern Haiku for the haiku club

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Cool Night Drizzle

by Gypsy Blue Rose


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cool night drizzle

pitter-patter on umbrella

knee-deep in the blues





MODERN HAIKU is the English adaptation of Classic Haiku. It's written in one to four lines with no strict syllable count, but as brief as possible. These poems use a pause usually marked by a dash before the satori (an insightful twist to ponder). Images don't need to be taken from nature. Seasonality is optional. Alliteration and metaphor are okay. Never rhymes. The em-dash ( -- ) is used to emphasize an interruption in speech before the satori. Haiku usually doesn't have a title but in fanstory we have to have one. The Haiku Foundation of America
Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis

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