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Comment from Mary Vigasin
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Well-written and presented NAANI. How true, what the humans wrought upon themselves, the river still flows although polluted by the aftermath of war.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much, Mary. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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So true. Mother Nature doesn't know what mess humans have gotten themselves into. It just remains itself. Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much, Barbara. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy
Comment from karenina
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Yes. It is not God nor nature.

It is human nature to identify friend and foe.

The sweet river simply quenches all.

What an important perspective!

Karenina

 Comment Written 25-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thank you, sweetie pie. Have a wonderful day.

    Gypsy
reply by karenina on 26-Sep-2022
    You as well!
Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your Naani poem- good picture presentation very colorful- I like the theme idea for the Poem- dimensional thought- friend and foe's using the same river independent of philosophy- nature not involved with such things- nice- good job

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    How come you gave me 4 stars. Can I improve something?

    Thank you very much, ap. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy
reply by AP Apgar on 25-Sep-2022
    No you?re good- hit the wrong one again- just updated Hug
Comment from aryr
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What a great naani, Gypsy. You are absolutely correct, nature does not know the difference of war and peace. I really enjoyed your two pictures- of the river and of the blue rose. Blessed Be n Hugs!

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much, aryr. I appreciate you. Blessed be and hugs.

    Gypsy
reply by aryr on 25-Sep-2022
    Most welcome, Gypsy. Blessed Be n Hugs!
Comment from lyenochka
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That's a very biblical concept that the Lord sends His rain on the righteous and unrighteous. In the same way, the river provides water to all the people regardless of their relationship to each other.

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 25-Sep-2022
    Yes, it's a God oriented poem. Thank you very much, big sister. I appreciate your exceptional review and feedback.

    Marival ❤️
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hi Gypsy, time goes by, wars go by, and still the river runs the same,
comforting all, welcoming all through all the trials and tribulations of
life. If only people could be more like a river, what a beautiful world
this would be. Well chosen photo. A poem to ponder. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
    Thank you, Margaret. I appreciate you took the time to read and review my poem.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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You emphasize here what we have always known, there are no natural divides between friend and foe in the field, only the orders of generals. It makes me remember footage of the unofficial Christmas truce tha the foot soldiers called in the First World War. Nicely done. Kate xx

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much, Katherine. I hope you are having a great weekend.

    Gypsy
    "Not all of us can do great things. But we can do small things with great love." - Mother Teresa


Comment from Mrs. KT
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Beautiful, Gypsy!
One of your very best in terms of message! (Your form is always spot on!)
Keenly perceptive and creative!

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 24-Sep-2022


reply by the author on 24-Sep-2022
    Thank you very much, Diane. I appreciate your exceptional six stars review and kind words. I hope you are having a great weekend.

    Gypsy
    "Not all of us can do great things. But we can do small things with great love." - Mother Teresa