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Naani Poem

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Nature Doesn't Know

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 

through peace and war,

the same river passes by our doors

to quench the thirst

of friend and foe

 




4/9/4/4 = 21 syllables

NAANI, is an Indian poetic form. It's very similar to Japanese poetic forms, in that it has a set line- and syllable count. It has 4-lines and a total of 20-25 syllables. It's usually about nature or human relations but not strictly. The lines are grammatically connected and never rhyme. *** click here for more information- shadowpoetry *** click here for more information-matt Forrest wordpress *** click here for examples -poetrysoup

Picture: Caño Cristales is a Colombian river located in the Serrania de la Macarena province of Meta and is a tributary of the Guayabero River. It was founded in 1969, by a group of cattle farmers.

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