NaPoWriMo 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "8. Secrets"NaPoWriMo 2021 Poetry Challenge
12 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
When we keep secrets, we often find that they haunt us in the middle of the night. I think we all should find a trusted person who will help us by letting us express our secrets.
Patricia
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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When we keep secrets, we often find that they haunt us in the middle of the night. I think we all should find a trusted person who will help us by letting us express our secrets.
Patricia
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your feedback, Patricia :) I appreciate it. Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your excellent 5-7-5 suite conveys a powerful message about simply keeping our mouths shut! If we tell things we really shouldn't, we can be sure others do the same.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Your excellent 5-7-5 suite conveys a powerful message about simply keeping our mouths shut! If we tell things we really shouldn't, we can be sure others do the same.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank so much, Janice, for your kind feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Debra, with your trio of haiku on secrets. Each one could stand alone, but together they make a profound impact. Your topic is well-expressed and so true in what you say. There are many who need to read and believe this.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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You did a great job, Debra, with your trio of haiku on secrets. Each one could stand alone, but together they make a profound impact. Your topic is well-expressed and so true in what you say. There are many who need to read and believe this.
Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Hello Jan :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback and generous 6 star rating. I really appreciate it! You made my day :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Sally Law
I share all my secrets with God because he knows them already. When I confess my secret sins to Him, they're not dirty anymore but cleansed now. I understand this poetry though and the heavy weight of secret sins that are too much to bear. Sending along my very best for the challenge. You're doing great with this daily event, dear Debra.
Sally XOs....
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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I share all my secrets with God because he knows them already. When I confess my secret sins to Him, they're not dirty anymore but cleansed now. I understand this poetry though and the heavy weight of secret sins that are too much to bear. Sending along my very best for the challenge. You're doing great with this daily event, dear Debra.
Sally XOs....
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Hi Sally :)
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra x
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Secrets
by Debra White
Hello, Debra,
Awesome 5/7/5 trio. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The words flow nicely. I like the secrets topic. Clever Satori.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Secrets
by Debra White
Hello, Debra,
Awesome 5/7/5 trio. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The words flow nicely. I like the secrets topic. Clever Satori.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your kind and encouraging feedback, Gypsy :) Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent trio of 5/7/5s. The subject of secrets is something that has a lot of nuance, so I hope you write a few more over the course of your NaPo project.
Great job and an enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Excellent trio of 5/7/5s. The subject of secrets is something that has a lot of nuance, so I hope you write a few more over the course of your NaPo project.
Great job and an enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Gloria, for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra :)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Compelling and thought-provoking--wise words indeed re keeping secrets to yourself--clever phrase--else they'll "repeat on you." I can relate--and also to the voices!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Compelling and thought-provoking--wise words indeed re keeping secrets to yourself--clever phrase--else they'll "repeat on you." I can relate--and also to the voices!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Hi Liz, thank you for your thoughtful feedback. I appreciate it :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Keeping a secret can indeed bear heavy on our shoulders, especially if it is a secret that should be shared. Some take secrets to the grave, a poignant write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Keeping a secret can indeed bear heavy on our shoulders, especially if it is a secret that should be shared. Some take secrets to the grave, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Thank you, Dolly, for your thoughtful feedback. Best wishes, Debra :) x
Comment from pome lover
you wrote this today. secrets - and the privacy of them. They are a burden, aren't they? and a responsibility.
Very good advice you gave. Your gal in the picture looks, from her position, either unhappy or overwhelmed, or both.
Am about to fall asleep on the keyboard. Talk to you later.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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you wrote this today. secrets - and the privacy of them. They are a burden, aren't they? and a responsibility.
Very good advice you gave. Your gal in the picture looks, from her position, either unhappy or overwhelmed, or both.
Am about to fall asleep on the keyboard. Talk to you later.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Thanks for your feedback, Katharine :)
Hope you got some sleep!
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from royowen
I think we've all got a darker side, and I think those whispering are not only in the head but from other evil sources who want to disrupt and deter one from reaching any sort of potential, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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I think we've all got a darker side, and I think those whispering are not only in the head but from other evil sources who want to disrupt and deter one from reaching any sort of potential, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Apr-2021
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2021
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Thank you for your feedback, Roy :)
Best wishes, Debra
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Most welcome Debra