Faces
Everyday questions12 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
We all struggle with who we are at times. We hope to be the angel more often than the devil. It may be easier that way.
Congrats on the third place finish in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healhty
Happy New Year.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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We all struggle with who we are at times. We hope to be the angel more often than the devil. It may be easier that way.
Congrats on the third place finish in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healhty
Happy New Year.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2020
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Thank you. Have a safe and happy new year.
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You're welcome. Thanks.
dp
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your prize Mya! You wisely flesh out the intriguing theme with an apt title/desc.--so many people waste that valuable space by repeating the text of the poem. Cheers. LIZ (So which are you today?)
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Congrats on your prize Mya! You wisely flesh out the intriguing theme with an apt title/desc.--so many people waste that valuable space by repeating the text of the poem. Cheers. LIZ (So which are you today?)
Comment Written 15-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much.
Comment from LJbutterfly
Have you ever wanted to improve something about yourself, but continuously reverted back to old habits? That's what this poem and artwork remind me of. You've posed a question I'm sure many have grappled with. Nice work, and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Have you ever wanted to improve something about yourself, but continuously reverted back to old habits? That's what this poem and artwork remind me of. You've posed a question I'm sure many have grappled with. Nice work, and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Thank you. It is something I grapple with myself from time to time.
Comment from moonsunrise
Thank you for sharing your poem "Faces".
Faces can be very deceiving. One can be wearing the mask of happiness when they are hurting inside. Faces have many facets for sure. Everyday
can bring on various facial expressions depending on what is going on with one's psyche.
Nice read.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Thank you for sharing your poem "Faces".
Faces can be very deceiving. One can be wearing the mask of happiness when they are hurting inside. Faces have many facets for sure. Everyday
can bring on various facial expressions depending on what is going on with one's psyche.
Nice read.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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That is so true. Thank you for reading.
Comment from greyson ernst
good luck in the contest this is a good poem and picture and as always keep writing and stay safe and have a happy happy holiday
sincerely Greyson Ernst
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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good luck in the contest this is a good poem and picture and as always keep writing and stay safe and have a happy happy holiday
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2020
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Thank you
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Mia Twysted your Everyday questions about Faces are a few of your every day questions. With your drawing of a half face she could be an angel or a devil if she has a split personalty.
Gert
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Hello Mia Twysted your Everyday questions about Faces are a few of your every day questions. With your drawing of a half face she could be an angel or a devil if she has a split personalty.
Gert
Comment Written 07-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2020
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Thank you for taking the time to review.
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You are welcome Mia Twysted
Gert
Comment from Mistydawn
I'm sure all of us has that inner voice that tries to put doubts in our head. It can stop us from becoming our best, accomplishing our goals if we let it. Your poem is well-written, very relatable. Your artwork is perfect for the poem.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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I'm sure all of us has that inner voice that tries to put doubts in our head. It can stop us from becoming our best, accomplishing our goals if we let it. Your poem is well-written, very relatable. Your artwork is perfect for the poem.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Thank you. I am glad you liked it. I toiled around trying to find the right words for this one.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This5-7-5 contest entry poem speaks about self identity crises the poet carries everyday with the same question of her own stand; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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This5-7-5 contest entry poem speaks about self identity crises the poet carries everyday with the same question of her own stand; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from sammielwf
Mia,
That question of "Who am I today" is one I think many people ask.
There are some people who are camilian like and can change and adapt on cue....then there are those that have trouble simply being true to themselves because they waver....and then there are those people who are solid and know themselves inside and out- never wavering...
On any given day we could be any of the three.
Well written little verse question.
Sammielwf
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Mia,
That question of "Who am I today" is one I think many people ask.
There are some people who are camilian like and can change and adapt on cue....then there are those that have trouble simply being true to themselves because they waver....and then there are those people who are solid and know themselves inside and out- never wavering...
On any given day we could be any of the three.
Well written little verse question.
Sammielwf
Comment Written 05-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Yes, that is it.
Comment from jaded831
Great poem taking about the human condition. The side we choose to show the world is important. We don't always act to please the world, we need to be ourselves. It raises the question of nature vs nurture.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Great poem taking about the human condition. The side we choose to show the world is important. We don't always act to please the world, we need to be ourselves. It raises the question of nature vs nurture.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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It does.
