Betrayal
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Comment from Ulla
Oh dear, Sandra. This is ominous. The storm is raging and all the while the baby has decided it's time to arrive. What the heck are they all to do?
What a great chapter. I can't wait to see. A big hug, Ulla xxxx
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Oh dear, Sandra. This is ominous. The storm is raging and all the while the baby has decided it's time to arrive. What the heck are they all to do?
What a great chapter. I can't wait to see. A big hug, Ulla xxxx
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Thank you so much, Ulla, I was surprised I hadn't had a load of reviews picking our errors! It's been manic here, and I've been so tired. But, it seems it wasn't as bad as I thought. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for those lovely six stars, and this fabulous review. Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
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You are doing so very well. Ulla xxx
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Thank you, dear. :)) xx
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
It is definitely a crucial time for Latifah who is banking on Tania to see her through this surprising development. The hurricane doesn't wait for anyone and is carrying on in its usual destructive manner while the humans involved gear up to handle this emergency.
NB:
Tania so I can show()where>> so I can show 'her' where
Ralf
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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It is definitely a crucial time for Latifah who is banking on Tania to see her through this surprising development. The hurricane doesn't wait for anyone and is carrying on in its usual destructive manner while the humans involved gear up to handle this emergency.
NB:
Tania so I can show()where>> so I can show 'her' where
Ralf
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Thank you again, Ralf, for another lovely review and for picking up my missing word, which I hastily dashed in to correct!! I'm so pleased you are enjoying my story, thank you. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
It is definitely a crucial time for Latifah who is banking on Tania to see her through this surprising development. The hurricane doesn't wait for anyone and is carrying on in its usual destructive manner while the humans involved gear up to handle this emergency.
NB:
Tania so I can show()where>> so I can show 'her' where
Ralf
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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It is definitely a crucial time for Latifah who is banking on Tania to see her through this surprising development. The hurricane doesn't wait for anyone and is carrying on in its usual destructive manner while the humans involved gear up to handle this emergency.
NB:
Tania so I can show()where>> so I can show 'her' where
Ralf
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Thank you again, Ralf, for another lovely review and for picking up my missing word, which I hastily dashed in to correct!! I'm so pleased you are enjoying my story, thank you. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pantygynt
Oh this is a magnificent piece of pathetic fallacy. No doubt the houss will collapse as the baby is born but everything will be all right unless the ungodly appear at the same time. Full of action. If this is what happens to your writing when you move house you should move more often. Action packed.
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Oh this is a magnificent piece of pathetic fallacy. No doubt the houss will collapse as the baby is born but everything will be all right unless the ungodly appear at the same time. Full of action. If this is what happens to your writing when you move house you should move more often. Action packed.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Move more often??? I'll almost ready for a long stay at Bedlam! Never, ever again, unless it's in my cardboard box! Lol. Thanks so much, Jim, for this lovely review and the six stars. I'm over the moon with your comments, even though your last sentence almost brought on a fit of the vapours! LOL!!! Hope to have time to chat soon. Warm hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Ric Myworld
Everything seems to be breaking through walls all at once, the storm through the wall, and Latifah's baby through the tunnel of life. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Everything seems to be breaking through walls all at once, the storm through the wall, and Latifah's baby through the tunnel of life. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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I like that, the tunnel of life. It truly is. Thank you so much, dear Ric, for those lovely six stars, and your fun review. You always give me a smile. Warm hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Gert sherwood
sandramitchell
my you have a great chapter with a hurricane coming and a baby girl being born.
There is this sentence I was confused with ---
Who is the person saying
"God! Please help me do this right. Please, don't let this baby die before she has had a chance to live."
Gert
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reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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sandramitchell
my you have a great chapter with a hurricane coming and a baby girl being born.
There is this sentence I was confused with ---
Who is the person saying
"God! Please help me do this right. Please, don't let this baby die before she has had a chance to live."
Gert
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Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Hello Gert, how lovely of you to read this part. Those were Tania's thoughts, pleading with God to help her deliver Latifah's baby. There is such a lot happening at the moment, and it looks like everything is going to happen at the same time. Thank you, dear friend, for your lovely review. I hope you are keeping well. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx
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sandramitchell you are moatt welcome
Gert
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is not at all good. I'm going Latifah has a short labor. I am not sure they can take a long drawn out one. Of course, a short one takes it's toll too. I am really liking this story.
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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This is not at all good. I'm going Latifah has a short labor. I am not sure they can take a long drawn out one. Of course, a short one takes it's toll too. I am really liking this story.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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No, I don't think they can either. I think one big shock will bring this baby out screaming her lungs off. Lol. Thank you so very much for this lovely review, my friend. I really appreciate your continued support. Warm hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Begin Again
Oh, Sandra... and you think I put my characters in a pickle... A baby is about to be born, and not one person has any idea of what to do, having not even held one. Good thing Tania appears to be level-headed enough to hold it together... Fakie it, girl! Praying for a safe delivery even while the hurricane blasts the house. Maybe I can conjure a guardian angel or two to help out. LOL, Terrific drama building! Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Oh, Sandra... and you think I put my characters in a pickle... A baby is about to be born, and not one person has any idea of what to do, having not even held one. Good thing Tania appears to be level-headed enough to hold it together... Fakie it, girl! Praying for a safe delivery even while the hurricane blasts the house. Maybe I can conjure a guardian angel or two to help out. LOL, Terrific drama building! Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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LOL, I guess I do rather write like you!! Yes, Tania must fake her feelings, and pretend she knows something about delivering a baby. Thank you so much for the lovely six stars and for this fabulous review, my friend. I really appreciate you. Warm hugs and smiles back. Sandra :)) xx
Comment from damommy
Oh, no! Now what? It must have been a horrendous hurricane to break through those walls. I'm hoping that all goes well with the delivery. I, of course, have never been in on any other than my own. My son, Stewart, has delivered several in the course of his career.
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Oh, no! Now what? It must have been a horrendous hurricane to break through those walls. I'm hoping that all goes well with the delivery. I, of course, have never been in on any other than my own. My son, Stewart, has delivered several in the course of his career.
Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 24-May-2021
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Aw, thank you, dear SATP, for those lovely stars and the wonderful review. Just one little thing, they are coming out to the eye and going through the inner wall of the hurricane, which is the worst part of it. The house walls are holding up for now. (I hope)
Your son must be in awe of being there to deliver a baby, what a wonderful experience it must be. My mother was with me all the way through my labour with my eldest boy. She said it was an incredible experience. I can see how much your son Stewart must love his job. How satisfying it must be.
Thank you again, my dear sister. Love and hugs! :)) Sandra xxx
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You are most welcome. 8-)
Comment from robyn corum
Sandra,
Really? A baby in the middle of a hurricane? Well, if they all survive, it will be quite the tale, won't it? What a way to make an entry into this crazy world. hahaha
I'm scared to see what you have next in mind. Be kind!
Thanks!
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reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Sandra,
Really? A baby in the middle of a hurricane? Well, if they all survive, it will be quite the tale, won't it? What a way to make an entry into this crazy world. hahaha
I'm scared to see what you have next in mind. Be kind!
Thanks!
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Comment Written 23-May-2021
reply by the author on 23-May-2021
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Hi Robyn, thank you so very much for coming to read this part, I'm all over the place with my moving. I didn't realise how old I really am, too old for moving. I'm nearly there, another three years should do it!!! lol. Now then, what better time is there to have a baby than in the middle of a hurricane? I think I'm going to be setting a new trend. This child will be famous! LOL. I will be kind, I love babies and all children. Mind you, whether I can stay kind with Colin and him mother is a different matter altogether. Warm hugs, my friend, I'll be catching up with you any time now. :)) Sandra xxx