I Travel
An analogue poem for Potlatch Poetry32 total reviews
Comment from Ms. Snyder
Awesome! I agree, so are the Fan Story stories and books - they take me away and send me places that I never thought at the tips of my fingers I would go. It is awesome the traveling I have done just since November. A beautiful and well thought out poem to describe my favorite thing in the world escape through reading. Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Awesome! I agree, so are the Fan Story stories and books - they take me away and send me places that I never thought at the tips of my fingers I would go. It is awesome the traveling I have done just since November. A beautiful and well thought out poem to describe my favorite thing in the world escape through reading. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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I'm so glad you like it and that you are a lover of books as well. Thank you so much for a lovely review.
Comment from lyenochka
Absolutely true! We all can travel that way through books and through each other's writings here. Lovely analogue poem - yet another new form you've introduced to me!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Absolutely true! We all can travel that way through books and through each other's writings here. Lovely analogue poem - yet another new form you've introduced to me!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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You take me so many places with YOUR writing, Helen. I'm glad you like this poem.
Comment from Gloria ....
Yes, very nice Yvonne. That is the power of our imagination and writers that can weave a world that transports us to new heights.
Excellent analogue poem .
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Yes, very nice Yvonne. That is the power of our imagination and writers that can weave a world that transports us to new heights.
Excellent analogue poem .
Gloria
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Gloria. I appreciate that very much.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Very well done. Good rhyme choices, and the message is perfect for FanStory. We all love getting away to new places and people... BEING a new person, as we can reading and/or writing stories and books. I don't know what I'd do without this site. :)
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Very well done. Good rhyme choices, and the message is perfect for FanStory. We all love getting away to new places and people... BEING a new person, as we can reading and/or writing stories and books. I don't know what I'd do without this site. :)
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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I feel the same way. I spend way too much time here, but I'm not going to stop. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Miss Sherry
Oh, yes, anywhere there is a chair, look and you will find me there! Just the loveliest idea. Darling artwork and a beautiful verse to go with it. Very nice!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Oh, yes, anywhere there is a chair, look and you will find me there! Just the loveliest idea. Darling artwork and a beautiful verse to go with it. Very nice!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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The family has threatened to bury me with a book. lol. I'm glad you're the same. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from meeshu
great rhymes and internal rhymes give this piece an even flow. with a rhythmic cadence it is a pleasure to read. we should all have such a place to go. nicely done, Yvonne.....................meeshu
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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great rhymes and internal rhymes give this piece an even flow. with a rhythmic cadence it is a pleasure to read. we should all have such a place to go. nicely done, Yvonne.....................meeshu
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Stephanie Launiu
Delightful analogue poem highlighting the wonder of books. When I saw your title, I thought you were going to write about a specific place. But you made a wise choice to write about books because it puts the world at your feet. Best of luck on the club challenge.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Delightful analogue poem highlighting the wonder of books. When I saw your title, I thought you were going to write about a specific place. But you made a wise choice to write about books because it puts the world at your feet. Best of luck on the club challenge.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you. Yes, I 'travel' a lot and change personalities at will. lol
Comment from His Grayness
To the best of my understanding of the guidelines for this work, it is delivered perfectly. The artwork/coloration is splendid indeed and I have no suggestions to improve this fine work in any way. and I thank this author for a really delightful work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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To the best of my understanding of the guidelines for this work, it is delivered perfectly. The artwork/coloration is splendid indeed and I have no suggestions to improve this fine work in any way. and I thank this author for a really delightful work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this wonderful review! I appreciate your lovely remarks.
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
I can relate, Damommy, books are fantastic, reading them is a wonderful way to get-away....go to so many different places!
The rhymes in your poem fall so effortlessly and lends the entire presentation wonderful flow.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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I can relate, Damommy, books are fantastic, reading them is a wonderful way to get-away....go to so many different places!
The rhymes in your poem fall so effortlessly and lends the entire presentation wonderful flow.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much. I'm glad you can relate.
Comment from Randa Dayle
Favorite cozy place!! Mine too!
I love books, and reading it's so great to get away to an alternate universe, or anywhere! Great poem, so keep it up!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Favorite cozy place!! Mine too!
I love books, and reading it's so great to get away to an alternate universe, or anywhere! Great poem, so keep it up!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Randa. I'm glad you love books, too. What a great way to 'travel.' lol