Driven By A Dream
A woman waiting on love...16 total reviews
Comment from DR DIP
beautiful write Diana just fix the line in the 4th stanza. it has stayed on one line as you can see
Her heart does yearn for so much more than milking blood from stones;
and if you listen carefully,
you can hear her silent moans.
Her heart does yearn for so much more
than milking blood from stones;
and if you listen carefully,
you can hear her silent moans.
Beautiful romance poem
dip
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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beautiful write Diana just fix the line in the 4th stanza. it has stayed on one line as you can see
Her heart does yearn for so much more than milking blood from stones;
and if you listen carefully,
you can hear her silent moans.
Her heart does yearn for so much more
than milking blood from stones;
and if you listen carefully,
you can hear her silent moans.
Beautiful romance poem
dip
Comment Written 23-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2019
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And now, I can give that nomination!! Woo Hoo! thanks for all your supportive comments!
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thank you so much
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:) most welcome!
Comment from Sally Law
Aw, beautifully penned, dear Diana. I am vanquished of sixes for this indeed is worthy. Please accept my five stars. I will be fanning you know and giving you the fifteenth review, and soon, a blue ribbon will be yours! It deserves it.
Always my best,
Sal xo
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Aw, beautifully penned, dear Diana. I am vanquished of sixes for this indeed is worthy. Please accept my five stars. I will be fanning you know and giving you the fifteenth review, and soon, a blue ribbon will be yours! It deserves it.
Always my best,
Sal xo
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you, thank you! Your review has made my day! Not only because you enjoyed, but for the pretty blue ribbon! I do wish for myself they offered more than just a few of those ?6?. I come across some wonderful works like yours that definitely deserve that rating! Enjoy your day, my precious new friend!
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Driven By A Dream", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I'm not given enough of them! I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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"Driven By A Dream", is an extremely well-written and deftly descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I'm not given enough of them! I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2019
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Thank you sincerely! I?m so happy you appreciated and thought it worthy enough to even read. I too ran out of ?6??s already, but I?m still honored you believe it is deserving! xo
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Diana,
my pen-pushing friend. I can never work out why we aren't given more sixes!!
Take care and God bless,
the Duchess !(-_-)!
Comment from juliaSjames
A universal story is shared in your poem, because so many of us, young and old, male and female share your character's quest for love in what seems to be a cold and lonely world.
Excellent meter and precise rhyme.
The repetition of the first stanza at the end of the write underscores the frustration and futility of her quest. No doubt this is why dating sites are so popular.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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A universal story is shared in your poem, because so many of us, young and old, male and female share your character's quest for love in what seems to be a cold and lonely world.
Excellent meter and precise rhyme.
The repetition of the first stanza at the end of the write underscores the frustration and futility of her quest. No doubt this is why dating sites are so popular.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for reading and your insightful comment! I totally agree with your sentiment. And i love your recent work, especially about the bottle bush tree as it was a plant i?d never heard of before :)
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You're welcome Diana. Thanks for your kind words. :))
Comment from Loren .
One word comes to mind in reading this and it is poignant. Another word follows and that is honesty and then courage to express what the heart is telling the soul to an audience of readers. This is a gentle, but bold poem that I truly enjoyed. Best of luck in the contest. Loren
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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One word comes to mind in reading this and it is poignant. Another word follows and that is honesty and then courage to express what the heart is telling the soul to an audience of readers. This is a gentle, but bold poem that I truly enjoyed. Best of luck in the contest. Loren
Comment Written 18-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you! I sincerely appreciate you stopping to check it out! Your feedback is awesome!
Comment from Joan E.
Welcome to FanStory--I hope the site is fulfilling your goals for membership.
I was taken by your title and matching picture selection plus color presentation. I admired your storytelling about a special dream and your use of rhyme to intensify it. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Welcome to FanStory--I hope the site is fulfilling your goals for membership.
I was taken by your title and matching picture selection plus color presentation. I admired your storytelling about a special dream and your use of rhyme to intensify it. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for taking time to read and comment! I am loving this site! Finally after all these years, I found a home for my work :)
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I am so pleased to hear your positive response. Here's to a long association with FanStory. Cheers- Joan
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XXOO!!!
Comment from patcelaw
As a young girl I dreamed of finding a man who would be 10-15 years older than me to be my husband. My husband was almost 13 years my senior and we had a wonderful marriage and raised 3 lovely daughters. We remained married until he died shortly before our 37 wedding anniversary.
I enjoyed your lovely story poem.
Patricia
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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As a young girl I dreamed of finding a man who would be 10-15 years older than me to be my husband. My husband was almost 13 years my senior and we had a wonderful marriage and raised 3 lovely daughters. We remained married until he died shortly before our 37 wedding anniversary.
I enjoyed your lovely story poem.
Patricia
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you, Pat! I?m glad it moved you. I?m so sorry you lost him so soon. The hardest thing in life is to lose your best friend! Thank God for the blessings of your children and their children xo
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the dream we have to find the perfect mate, and when we cannot find them soon we are driven by our dream to keep waiting until he arrives.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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A very well-written poem about the dream we have to find the perfect mate, and when we cannot find them soon we are driven by our dream to keep waiting until he arrives.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2019
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Thank you reading and commenting! It helps me to know what others think!! :)
Comment from misscookie
I l love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
they are a perfect Match
You captured my attention from the first word to the last
I could relate to your every word Tell me why does have to hurt
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem
Cookie
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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I l love the artwork you choose to go with your poem
they are a perfect Match
You captured my attention from the first word to the last
I could relate to your every word Tell me why does have to hurt
Thank you for sharing this heartfelt poem
Cookie
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you for your precious comment! You have truly made my day!!! Hugs!
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Well that is nice to hear and nice of you think i did
Peace God be with you
Cookie
Comment from the13thpoet
Great poem! Love your word choice and delivery, it had good flow. Your poem created great imagery, loved how you closed it how you began it. Awesome.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Great poem! Love your word choice and delivery, it had good flow. Your poem created great imagery, loved how you closed it how you began it. Awesome.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2019
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Thank you very much! It just seemed a natural fit to start and end the same! Big hugs for your precious review!
