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The Human Body
A chapter in the book Act Of Endurance

A Broiler

by TPAC

Food selected, in our mouths hits do fits, by ripping bites stuff put within;
do splits down this dark cave wall ride, toss, swirl items exist, dissolve in tiny pieces:
with other, tumble to pot.

Delights into tube be pushed in a cube, all being divided;
stirred under reforming pressure, with others digested too eaten, mix acids:
cut toxic concoction, lube it various areas.

Food place inside us, cooking bits quick in infusion, revolve all;
alter portions in this hole, erupt out from, exploding, hot gases, parting in a soup be there:
evolve factors running our system as a car.

We must try at efforts controlling, eaten that feed our bodies;
state that's enough, cut back from the trust, bust to in ills, them that hurt:
improve lives, our health.

Yet, got times, placed goods do over-stuff, yell eat things, erupt boiler;
corrupt treats system, disrupt it the inner:
mire freed, or a loud fart.




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