Commentary and Philosophy Poetry posted May 2, 2015 Chapters:  ...42 43 -44- 51... 


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Life Change

A chapter in the book Act of Endurance

Downward Fall

by TPAC

My future, stop work, near, view pits of life, face, dazzled, it's an ace, no job, retirement; isn't great for me: kept in a race.

Reality fated a laid trap, bust any man, intend to kill me, a timeless evil, thrust at death, rippling fear; shears: rust in once able bones.

My life treasure, on this dated, yet to be sunk ship, in a low chamber hid, with this ax, to cut, towering in one hand, there, slice someone's neck, across a rip; dip: a sentenced fate.

This brainless, darken state, is not a direct conscious to good, cage inside a tangle, knotted, a damp wet prison, filthy, resettled wrangle, final destiny; it is a froze corpse: mangle death.

Everybody has a truth, told wisdom, sown life, conveys your destiny, trapped in, it is a fool, sent into a hell alone, having full rent, to lye within, bent a sad gift: a factor seen full age.

Infant's birth, becomes elder, rebirth him into, fallen horrors, found in a coffin, no repair, buried low in hard ground, eternal palace, fair; its home of despair: it's a grave.

One's autumn, to come a day, reveals a tragic factor, yell of, tell your song flaw, stating your life story, turn reality to a fate aging, be summed up, totals; fallen in a closed cell: larger cage.

Life, set rays that glow, to fall downward, in this swim, row years in ages, activities to live, into cut destiny, slow in descent, unfortunate its imminent, of those old; their death: fated time.




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One's concept of themselves, being viewed by oneself to be above peers, abilities to rule over others: as a higher. Mind knowing this fate is not by an emerging new born: but ruled by those eternal.
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