Romance Poetry posted March 26, 2025 Chapters:  ...10 11 -13- 14... 


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pair of senryu and pair of naani poems
A chapter in the book 2025 Japanese Poetry

Rip and High Tides

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
 
 

your tuscan tanned skin 

covered with a firmament

of shiny sand stars

our searing bodies  cool

with swelling billow waves

of rip and high tides

your sun-kissed  auburn hair

is windswept here and there

and your unruly curls 

caress my face

your enchanting eyes 

are timing with aquamarine sea

coloring my world

with passion and awe





SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines. For Senryu you don't need a season word (Kigo). the haiku foundation senryu rules

Naani is one of India's most popular poetic forms. Naani poem consists of 4 lines and 20 to 25 syllables and any subject. Generally, it depends upon human relations and current statements. This poetry was introduced by Dr. Gopi, with the University, in Andhra Pradesh. more information

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem.

Gypsy

Pictures from my Pinterest account. Poems and presentations by Gypsy Blue Rose (c)
Copyright 3/26/25


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