2025 Japanese Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Rip and High Tides".
7 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
The beach is such a romantic setting, and he way you have combined its movement and scenery with that of romance and desire is just beautiful, verry well written and presented****kahpot
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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The beach is such a romantic setting, and he way you have combined its movement and scenery with that of romance and desire is just beautiful, verry well written and presented****kahpot
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from Mark Schardine
They have found true love, and even if it only lasts for a moment, they will keep fond memories of it. Others see them and are happy for them, or perhaps jealous.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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They have found true love, and even if it only lasts for a moment, they will keep fond memories of it. Others see them and are happy for them, or perhaps jealous.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much,
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
ew i hate lying on sand... or even walking on it... give me a sidewalk lol!
this was a great pair of opposites attract
the girl is the senryu and the guy is the naani LOL
cool imagery and presentation and smooth flow throughout
no spag or typos noticed
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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ew i hate lying on sand... or even walking on it... give me a sidewalk lol!
this was a great pair of opposites attract
the girl is the senryu and the guy is the naani LOL
cool imagery and presentation and smooth flow throughout
no spag or typos noticed
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This poem is filled with innocent passion. You do that very well and this is another example of your shining talent. Thank you for sharing this exceptional talent with us.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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This poem is filled with innocent passion. You do that very well and this is another example of your shining talent. Thank you for sharing this exceptional talent with us.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
Very passionate Senryu and Naani poems that express in my mind, the emotions tgat is felt when two lovers come together. Your picture creates thus very imagery of passionate love. Thank you for sharing,
RJ
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Very passionate Senryu and Naani poems that express in my mind, the emotions tgat is felt when two lovers come together. Your picture creates thus very imagery of passionate love. Thank you for sharing,
RJ
Comment Written 27-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
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You're welcome
RJ
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Two verse forms bound beautifully together to capture the essence of this moment of passion in which nature and sensual pleasure blend perfectly together. Thank you for sharing, MariVal. Debbie
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Two verse forms bound beautifully together to capture the essence of this moment of passion in which nature and sensual pleasure blend perfectly together. Thank you for sharing, MariVal. Debbie
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much 😊
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
I like how you show this couple completely entranced with one another and everything from the curls and eyes all reflect the colors of "passion and awe" to the narrator.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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I like how you show this couple completely entranced with one another and everything from the curls and eyes all reflect the colors of "passion and awe" to the narrator.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2025
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2025
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Thank you very much, big sis. 😊
Love,
Marival
