General Poetry posted March 12, 2024 | Chapters: | -Prologue- 1... |
Senryu Suite (for rules ck my author notes)
A chapter in the book 2024 Favorites
Parting Blue Shadows
by Gypsy Blue Rose
all senryu are 17 syllables or less
I come to you at night, parting blue shadows — the moon rests on our skin
your desire ripples up my thighs— fluttering in hidden places
I love you with ache, sweetness, and flame— unlike any other
I longed for you throughout time ... life after life— your soul is my beacon
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SENRYU is a Japanese short unrhymed poem that uses imagistic language to express the essence of a deeply felt moment in time. Unlike Haiku, senryu is about human nature and doesn't need a season word. It resonates on a deeper level, leaving the reader enlightened and making an insightful connection between the top two lines and the last one, called the SATORI. It's written in 17 syllables OR LESS and three lines.
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"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason." - Novalis
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