Romance Poetry posted June 15, 2023 Chapters:  ...292 293 -294- 295... 


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Choka 5/7 5/7 5/7 5/7/7

A chapter in the book One Thousand Cranes

Black Rain

by Gypsy Blue Rose

 
 
 
cold and cruel black rain
      covers our withered front yard

cause you are not here
      to embrace me ... anymore

midst sombered shadows
      of our abandoned dark home

you took the sunshine
      and promises to grow old
      together ... but I'm alone
 
 
 
 
 




CHOKA-It's a Japanese court poetic form of the 6th to 14th century consisting of nine-lines in a 5/7/5/7/5/7/5/7/7 syllables pattern and may be repeated. Originally, CHOKA was written in 100 sets. It was composed mainly to commemorate life events. for examples and more information from the Poets Collective CLICK HERE

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Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus

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